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You Must Change by DeathArrow [Email]

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Hits: 247
Comments: 16
Votes: 1
Plays: 45
Last Played: Dec 02, 2008 - 06:52:37 PM
Downloads: 9
Fans: 5
Uploaded: Sep 25, 2008 - 10:13:17 AM
Last Updated: Dec 04, 2008 - 11:48:48 AM
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Description:
This song is about these bitches who jump from this to that boy. I really hate these girls so I wrote a song about it. It describes one of them and tells a story that she first lies on the beach to look for some new guys to eat. Then she has...

Lyrics:
[Verse I]
This summer will be long
Bitches still lyin' in the sun
Cheating on everyone
Thinking just with their tongue

7 relationships side by side
Making out with 340 guys
Not thinking 'bout loosing cable
Now you have fuck on the table

[Bridge]
But do you think about real love
But do you think about not fucking us
So come on and take something brain
Cause what you cause is just pain

But do you think about fucking off
But do you think about ****
So come on and take something brain
Cause what you cause is just pain

[Chorus]
High time that you change something
High time that you stop messing
What do you do if there comes your dad
So come on come on come out of bed
High time that you realize
That what you want is just a fair price
But you must change
But you must change

[Verse II]
Now you've reached the lowest point
Didn't you hear my fucking voice
Come on come on you heard it clear
You just behave like a stupid cheer

Don't play strip poker with your friends
And stop this job you do with your hands
Lala, you sing funny songs
About a girl you used to know

[Bridge]
But do you think about real love
But do you think about not fucking us
So come on and take something brain
Cause what you cause is just pain

[Chorus]
High time that you change something
High time that you stop messing
What do you do if there comes your dad
So come on come on come out of bed
High time that you realize
That what you want is just a fair price
But you must change
But you must change

[Verse III]
L O S E R
L O S E R
L O S E R
L O S E R
Loser! Loser! (You're a loser)
Loser! Loser! (Stupid loser)
Loser! Loser! (You're a loser)
Loser! Loser! (Stupid loser)
And L O S E R, L O S E R must change

[Chorus]
High time that you change something
High time that you stop messing
What do you do if there comes your dad
So come on come on come out of bed
High time that you realize
That what you want is just a fair price
But you must change
But you must change

Hardware:
Apple MacBook, Electric Guitar, Studio Microphone, Studio Headphones

Software:
GarageBand
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i liked &mdash 09/25/08 - 10:16:52 AM
what you did with the vocals. they are in sync, but not. it gives the song a psychedelic vibe. great post!
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--- &mdash 09/25/08 - 10:24:50 AM
thank you very much !!!
would be happy if you listen to my other songs too!!!

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You Must Change &mdash 09/25/08 - 10:19:36 AM
Good rockin song ...you are enjoyin your guitar
distortion ... nice on my headphone ..thnx for sharin !

but

(do you have really need to put bad [Explicit] ??

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--- &mdash 09/25/08 - 10:23:32 AM
so first of all thank you for commenting again!!
and for the nice comment !!

so yeah i'm very sorry about using swear words but you know i'm young and we young people like to use bad explicit...and if i write my songs it just comes out of me and then i don't want to change (blah blah blah), but i always try not to use swear words...

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A good, twisted laugh &mdash 09/25/08 - 10:58:26 AM
It's a nice break from polite Victorian society to hear some fun-letter words. Thanks for the blast. The line between hate and humor is thin, thanks for the laugh and the venom. Nice mix.

My only critique if you're looking to make this a music-biz airplay type mix or a CD release type situation is that the machine drum-rolls are a little blatantly artificial. You might either finesse them to sound more natural or else go blatant like the humor here, and give them some whacked-out effects.

The ending ... you're slayin' me with you laughs and mine.


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--- &mdash 09/25/08 - 11:09:44 AM
thank you very very much for your detailed comment!
and also thanks for the contructive critique, i know that the drums sound like rubbish i really have to make them sound better...
but is the last line you wrote critique or is this positive??? you meant that you had to laugh right??? (i'm little bit confused today xD)

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hell yah... &mdash 09/25/08 - 02:45:38 PM
another fantastic tune deatharrow! my love for your style and sound is growing more and more with each tune you release...extraordinary and new, catchy and yet dark. i'm friggin lovin it man....keep 'em coming! fav'd and downloaded, thanx man!

age

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--- &mdash 09/26/08 - 11:04:58 AM
oh soooo happy about your support!!!
and happy that you like my music, too!!!
in a few days i will release another song, so i would be interested again what u think!!!
see you!

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you must change &mdash 09/25/08 - 07:16:43 PM
for all the girls i love before. ha ha

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hook &mdash 09/26/08 - 01:58:08 AM
The song is very monotone, but that also gives it a grooving, brooding quality that seems to fit the frustrated mind very well. The less serious and more fun ending seems to symbolize that life goes on and we can all forgive and forget and have fun again. Very nice.

All this needs is one moment of a dynamic climax to give it a hook, and you'll be all set.

Nice work.

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--- &mdash 09/26/08 - 10:50:54 AM
you actually noticed what i felt when i wrote this song. you can really think yourself into others, thats a very cool talent you have i really admire that !!
and also thanks for constructive critique!!
very happy about that!!
many many greets!!

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this sounds huge &mdash 09/26/08 - 09:00:06 AM
maybe a tad too loud and compressed to death. The piano and vocal breaks is great. personally I don't mind the ratatat sound, it's strange enough to stand on its own, as is the final babble.

I don't mind four letter words either (except "work")

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--- &mdash 09/26/08 - 11:00:13 AM
thanks for the constructive comment (always happy about constructive commenters xD)
but what do you mean with ratatat sound???

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ratatatat &mdash 09/27/08 - 08:15:06 AM
the drumroll, if you prefer.

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nice one &mdash 09/26/08 - 05:21:17 PM
i love the way you skewed the vocals, really gives it a little extra something. i like how the one voice is fast and the background is slow and soupy. great guitar too. you do great stuff, i envy your youth and can't wait for the next one. very clever song. sums up a feeling that we have all had at some point. great job.

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--- &mdash 09/27/08 - 06:27:46 AM
thanks you very much for commenting!!
it'd be very good if you listen to my other stuff!!!
greets

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