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ElPeruano

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When describing a minor bout of writer's block to a friend, she gave me some good advice (i think she read it in a book somewhere, unfortunately I don't recall the name). She said "When you can't seem to be able to write anything, write lots of bad first drafts. Just go with it. First drafts are allowed to be bad. You can go back and tweak them later."

This poem is a bad first draft that I ended up liking. I revised it very minimally.

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Hits: 391
Comments: 5
Fans: 3
Plays: 34
Downloads: 0
Votes: 2
Uploaded: Sep 28, 2008 - 04:13:07 PM
Last Updated: Sep 28, 2008 - 04:13:07 PM Last Played: Nov 01, 2009 - 10:31:58 PM

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Dj French Toast	Dj French Toast said 423 days ago (September 28th, 2008)
	Nice EL Pizzle : ) Nice poem man : ) Check out my latest song called Its The French Toast(Colab W/WillBill808)

ElPeruano	ElPeruano said 422 days ago (September 29th, 2008)
	thanks toasty mc toast. . . he leaves you feeling burned. Check out my latest song called Requiem (w/ TNTrio)

Diviner	Diviner said 422 days ago (September 29th, 2008)
	Lovely Really good and interesting poem. I like also the way the read the poem out, its always good when you hear the original writer reading out their own poems because you get to hear how it is supposed to be. Nice one. Check out my latest song called Space Program (Space Race 2009)

ElPeruano	ElPeruano said 422 days ago (September 29th, 2008)
	:) thanks Diviner!!! I've been trying to write more lately so hopefully there will be more to come! Check out my latest song called Requiem (w/ TNTrio)

Konscious	Konscious said 421 days ago (September 30th, 2008)
	Smooth I like the poem man, very poetic lyrics from a biological theme, but most of all i like the delivery of the poem, very very nicely done. It grabs you and holds you, through your change of tempo and tone. I'm now inspired to get into this spoken word thing. Thanks :D Check out my latest song called Rhythm of design

ElPeruano	ElPeruano said 421 days ago (September 30th, 2008)
	gracias amigo I'm glad you dig it man. can't wait to hear what you come up with! im used to a new konscious track every day lol. I guess i was spoiled. peace. Check out my latest song called Requiem (w/ TNTrio)

Enrique Gil	Enrique Gil said 421 days ago (September 30th, 2008)
	Very nice man! hypnotic verses...not what I expected here at MJ! Check out my latest song called Simple Feelings

ElPeruano	ElPeruano said 420 days ago (October 1st, 2008)
	thank you! The great thing about MJ is you can find your niche, and if you can't, then you can create it. People here tend to have open minds. :) thanks for checking it out and leaving some love! ill be checking yours out next. Check out my latest song called Requiem (w/ TNTrio)

saymme	saymme said 390 days ago (October 31st, 2008)
	( : Very nice You done this ! Very well performed ! You're improving : ) : ) Much enjoyed ! ThankYou !! Lena

ElPeruano	ElPeruano said 366 days ago (November 25th, 2008)
	thank you! thanks for the kind comments! I'm working on my writing so I'm glad it shows. much love. Check out my latest song called Requiem (w/ TNTrio)

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I'm a 20 year old college student that loves music but never seems to have the time to do it justice. I dont really know what I really want out of life yet. Musical experience is fairly limited. I played piano since I was five off and on. I quit in h... [see more]

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