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Last Played: Nov 28, 2008 - 11:13:47 PM
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Uploaded: Sep 28, 2008 - 04:13:07 PM
Last Updated: Sep 28, 2008 - 04:13:07 PM
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When describing a minor bout of writer's block to a friend, she gave me some good advice (i think she read it in a book somewhere, unfortunately I don't recall the name). She said "When you can't seem to be able to write anything, write lots of bad first drafts. Just go with it. First drafts are allowed to be bad. You can go back and tweak them later."

This poem is a bad first draft that I ended up liking. I revised it very minimally.
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Nice EL Pizzle &mdash 09/28/08 - 11:49:19 PM
: ) Nice poem man : )

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thanks toasty &mdash 09/29/08 - 10:11:46 PM
mc toast. . . he leaves you feeling burned.




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Lovely &mdash 09/29/08 - 02:31:05 AM
Really good and interesting poem. I like also the way the read the poem out, its always good when you hear the original writer reading out their own poems because you get to hear how it is supposed to be. Nice one.

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:) &mdash 09/29/08 - 10:58:50 PM
thanks Diviner!!!

I've been trying to write more lately so hopefully there will be more to come!

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Smooth &mdash 09/30/08 - 04:47:04 PM
I like the poem man, very poetic lyrics from a biological theme, but most of all i like the delivery of the poem, very very nicely done. It grabs you and holds you, through your change of tempo and tone. I'm now inspired to get into this spoken word thing. Thanks :D

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gracias amigo &mdash 09/30/08 - 11:42:33 PM
I'm glad you dig it man. can't wait to hear what you come up with! im used to a new konscious track every day lol. I guess i was spoiled. peace.

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Very nice man! &mdash 09/30/08 - 11:46:28 PM
hypnotic verses...not what I expected here at MJ!

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thank you! &mdash 10/01/08 - 11:40:31 AM
The great thing about MJ is you can find your niche, and if you can't, then you can create it. People here tend to have open minds. :)

thanks for checking it out and leaving some love! ill be checking yours out next.

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( : &mdash 10/31/08 - 07:36:29 PM
Very nice You done this ! Very well performed ! You're improving : ) : ) Much enjoyed !
ThankYou !! Lena

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thank you! &mdash 11/25/08 - 12:32:29 AM
thanks for the kind comments! I'm working on my writing so I'm glad it shows. much love.

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