Peace Within.3

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3rd version... I used some suggestions, and did some more mixing. Thanks for the help! (Only second day since conception, so I still have a ways!)

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Find your peace within...

(Choir)
We need world peace, we need world peace, we need world peace, we need world peace...

I know I will see tomorrow will be nice...

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Uploaded: Oct 05, 2008 - 03:57:22 PM
Last Updated: Oct 05, 2008 - 03:57:22 PM Last Played: Sep 20, 2009 - 09:42:24 AM

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ktb	ktb said 412 days ago (October 5th, 2008)
	3rd version must be the charm. i didn't hear the earlier cuts, but this sounds wonderful. Metheny-esque, rich in texture. I like it Check out my latest song called off the deck (w/Z293)

drakonis

drakonis said 412 days ago (October 5th, 2008)

improved...
The intro is getting better. I think the long held synth note may be a little loud in the mix, or maybe you can amplitude-sculpt it, give it some rise/fall in volume... it gets a little persistent... although, in some ways, I guess that builds some tension :-) Good singing voice. From your notes it looks like the high-pitched voice I mentioned earlier is just a place-holder for later, so I won't re-iterate that distracting "wo^rld" repetition. Love the pizzicato srings near the end. The percussion is OK, but may be a bit busy... I might reduce it in places, so you can use it to build excitement here and there by adding more drums, then relaxing with fewer. Also, you can never go wrong with a slowly building open hi-hat roll in a spot or two at the end of a quiet section before kicking into high gear :-) Gives it some urgency.
Just some thoughts! Sounds wonderful, and well worth working on!
ttfn,
Drakonis

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saymme	saymme said 412 days ago (October 5th, 2008)
	Wow...! This is certainly an improvement : ) Hear Your voice mush better here really cool ...!(!) ...Just LOVELY listening.. : ) Your voice could be upfront abit more so its even easier hearing Your words !! KUDOS - POWER in this ... ( : Peace starts within.. so True !

Enrique Gil	Enrique Gil said 412 days ago (October 5th, 2008)
	The beginning is great.... and keeps getting better. Drakonis comments are always very helpful. Check out my latest song called Simple Feelings

musichead	musichead said 408 days ago (October 9th, 2008)
	great sining very fine song. Its turning out to be a very good song..well written!! The pizz strings are great!! good touch.... Check out my latest song called Lets Take a Holiday

said 408 days ago (October 10th, 2008)

Has breadth
The scope of this piece out-shines much of what's here at macjams. There is a creative 'idea' behind this composition that's more than a thought or an observation. As far as the musicianship is concerned: Strings are engaging, piano well-employed, and the vocal work is unique. Those three elements especially draw me in. Also, the composition is well-constructed, and there's refreshing dynamic range. Engineering is good too; you've got a clarity of parts, yet there is a thick texture to the sound. I sense you're not completely at rest with this yet. 'Am looking forward to your further refinements.

catsoundspub	catsoundspub said 407 days ago (October 10th, 2008)
	Thank you for taking the time to comment. There is room for more lyrics as well. So if anyone has ideas please feel free to share. Thanks again! Check out my latest song called Keep the Change

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Name: Brian Catlin

I always knew I loved expressing myself through writing music, but it wasn't until my father passed away of cancer in 2006 that I decided to follow my dream of making a successful career out of it. So I packed my bags and headed to Atlanta in the sp... [see more]

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