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My Pseudo Love Folk Song by kickliquid [Email]
Genre: Acoustic

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Comments: 4
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Last Played: Nov 11, 2008 - 08:26:29 PM
Downloads: 7
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Uploaded: Oct 12, 2008 - 04:09:30 AM
Last Updated: Oct 12, 2008 - 04:09:30 AM
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Looking from some Critiques and and Suggestions. I've gotten to a point where there are a few things I want to do but I want to get some second opinions. What could/should I do differently? What can I add to beef up the sound or perfect the vocals? Thanks for your all your feedback

Lyrics:
Hannah worked at the Grocery Store , selling fruit by the Jersey Shore
In attempt to concede a defeat by the majority

She would blush at the very thought, that maybe I actually had enough guts to say clean up on aisle 8, my hearts on the floor

and all them crazy kids in tight girls pants and band t-shirts are making their way, making their way down the to cigarette aisle
and they all know that Hannah, that art school girl that all the boys loved ran the 20 items, only 20 items or less lane

and

She don't care for politics, no she don't
She don't care if you are wrong or right, pick your fights
think of ways to make her smile, Everyday
this is the final straw


One by one they line themselves up waiting through Delay
Two by two the line goes back as far as the debate
Three of them are falling for her in the midst of Change
Four men down 5 more to go Time to Go Time to Go!!!
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I never do vocals... &mdash 10/12/08 - 04:33:09 AM
... thus I can't really give you any advice on beefing them up. This sounds pretty good to my ears, so maybe you don't need to do too much altering.

Really nice song indeed. :)

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My Pseudo Love Folk Song &mdash 10/12/08 - 05:30:05 AM
This is a nice song ..I find your vocal complete !!
hmmm maybe a female vocal would do something cool ...
I found the guitar very high that distracting the singing
and the floating of the song ...the lead guitars are
perfect ..very nice clean recording ..thnx alot for
sharin !!!!

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Cool song &mdash 10/14/08 - 05:30:49 PM

First thing... The sounds just before the guitar are a little bit distracting.

The guitar is nice... But when the vocals kick in they completely cover the guitar. I'd back them down a little and give them a little echo or reverb.

Aside from that they are pretty cool! Cool song!


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Thanks for the Critique &mdash 10/14/08 - 05:35:06 PM
Nice thank you, I will get on it as soon as possible

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