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Acoustic (562), romantic (38), folk (413), autumn (28), fall (23)
Description:
This is a live take of a song I wrote some time ago for a project called Dream Nth. It's a love song... but somewhat twisted. Seeing as it is Autumn.. I thought it might be fitting.
Lyrics:
AutumnalThat time of year in you behold
Your russet eyes are cold my love
My voice is but a falling leaf
That circles to your feet my love
And laying there – a token bare
For you my love
In serving you – reduce me to
My love
We know the rains will come
Thunder crash
Like a bomb
Winds will blow so carelessly
But strong the roots
Of the tree
The sunset fades your face again
Your silhouette clings to my love
The last leaf on the twisted tree
On bended knee for you my love
And idolize my only prize
That’s you my love
In serving you – reduce me to
Your love
Hardware:
Ovation guitar and 2 AKG mics.Software:
Recorded live with Cubase - transferred to GB.You must be registered and logged-in to comment.
Feter
WHat an awesome poem and music ..great great singing
my friend ..I m impressed by your pickin ...this is
so cosy and warm fit the Our House caffee house .
good job my friend ..thnx alot for sharin !!!!
LunaTrick
I keep missing out on the coffeehouse stuff - I need to keep up on the forum better.
particledots
is really nice D
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LunaTrick
Appreciate your support and hope you are enjoying a break!
drakonis
very cool song, in many ways... sent a little shiver as I was reading along. Great singing, playing, lyrical imagery, and recorded mix. I like it! Only thing missing was just a hint of occasional cello bows here and there :-) I could almost hear where they should go... but you'd know best.
Nice work, Daniel!
ttfn,
Drakonis
LunaTrick
I recently redid a studio version of the song and added some cello. Perhaps it will get posted on here someday. Great minds think alike eh?
tokai
intro guitar is lovely and flowing helps to carry your wonderful voice over the autumnal breeze you've made. Your lyrics are great, a fitting tribute to my favorite season for the light.
LunaTrick
I really enjoy your work also. Hope to hear a lot more!
MarkHolbrook
song and wonderful sounds!
LunaTrick
Appreciate it!
Char
this is very sensual. Such a romantic you are. I love this. I thought it was lyrical, and that the artwork and song are perfect compliments to each other. I'm sorry I didn't find this any sooner. But, better late than never.
Thanks very much. Makes me warm inside. :)
LunaTrick
I suppose I am a Romantic in a twisted sort of way. Don't tell anyone though...
Char
Snicker. Post another like this. Please. :)
lengold
and wonderful performance. Love it.
Cheers
Len
LunaTrick
Always a treat to get your feedback.
bud
I really like the timing and shifting of your phrasing - both on the guitar and vocally. Very refreshing.
LunaTrick
Great to have you as a listener - especially now that we're collab-mates!
Alannah
.. reminds me so much of Jack Johnson ..... I cant think of the exact song .... but I will .. I will ! You could have a little more "clarity" in your vox .(mixing) ... but I suspect you are like me and like to "hide such things" in teems of reverb and FX ... but you are a fine singer and should let them SHINE !!!!
LunaTrick
If you say so luv! Will keep working on it.
Rebsie
God your voice is stunning. I could listen to it all day. Oh, er ... now that I mention it ...
We know the rains will come. Yes indeedy. Got enough of that pelting prize yet?