If I were gonna give you some totally honest feedback .. here is where it would lie ..... I started to listen ... and it sounded a little Midi-ish at first .. and I was gonna click it off (cause I've been drinking and it wasn't loud enough for my mood of the moment) (being honest now) ... without giving it a fair shake ... then the instruments came in and my interest wes piqued .. and I thought .. hmmmm now we're talking ... but this now should be LOUDER ..... cause it was startin to sound like some rawkin was going on ... and then it ended ..... so sigh ... it ended ... I think it has some potential ..... might have had a slight ZZ-Top feel if ya cranked it some ... replaced a little of the MIDI with a more LIVE sounding instrumemtation ... but bear in mind ... it's 1:30 a.m. now .. and I have been drinking copious quantities of alcohol ... so "grain of salt" ok ? I listened 2x now ... and still stand by my comment .. please take it in the vein in which it is intended and don't be offended ... ya got something here .....

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haha, thanks for all that, you did exactly what I asked for though, I needed some feed back, I'm gonna wait till I get some speakers before going on with it because I'm only using my laptop speakers which suck, so in the mean time I'll try to work these comments everyone gave into it. So I hope you guys like it when its finished.

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Cool Rockin ...wish the guitars more up ..this is
all so cool..!!!

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This is a straight ahead Satrianish boogie, so it needs a bigger guitar sound. I thought the intro was fine. But I'm patient, so think about Alannah's comment. The harmonic effect is nice. I think you need some kind of theme to help define it. The guitar riff during the last 15 seconds is a cool variation.

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