TheForgivenV2 by PrototypeEightyOne
Genre: Hip Hop-Rap
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2nd version, added elements. comments and feedback appreciated.
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TracyVosh
I like both versions of them. It's very hypnotic and a soothing antidote to a rough day.
PrototypeEightyOne
thanks tracy, it still is a little rough around the edges, and needs some work but thanks i appreciate that. i like how its sounding so far. intros raw.
sorry to hear your havin such a rough day.. Hopefully it settles down for you!
TracyVosh
Thank you for your kind words and concern. That alone helps relieve the stress!
Konscious
i like the added elements indeed, so far sounds good, i like the vibe of this one
PrototypeEightyOne
thanks Kon i wasnt sure about the added parts in the verse. perticularly the synth that plays the quick 2 notes. im still not sure if it suits the feel of the track. Im going to experiment more with it tonight.
EEFliess
now my 2 cents...the percussion is a little on the tinny, treble-ish side, it (in my opinion) needs to go down a hair and the harpsichord and vox elements need upped a little...if you have a primary instrument here, and I am guessing (and I may be wrong) that it would be a combination of the keyboard and vox elements, everything else (bass, drums, rhythm section) can fill in the gaps sounding their best with a slightly lower volume...one criticism that I got in the past that I am addressing is my stuff audibly being a wall of sound, in other words, too much volume all at once...Overall a great little ambient piece, keep 'em coming!
PrototypeEightyOne
lol u had to pick the pick the most random incomplete track on my list to crit huh :P just playin, ive only put 2 hrs into this and posted it for that exact purpose.. thanks for taking the time and breaking this down. i agree on all counts, and will take it back to the lab..thanks eeeflies.