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2nd version, added elements. comments and feedback appreciated.
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| PrototypeEightyOne said 381 days ago (November 5th, 2008) | |
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yo thanks tracy, it still is a little rough around the edges, and needs some work but thanks i appreciate that. i like how its sounding so far. intros raw. sorry to hear your havin such a rough day.. Hopefully it settles down for you! Check out my latest song called Confusion
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| TracyVosh said 380 days ago (November 6th, 2008) | |
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Thank you... Thank you for your kind words and concern. That alone helps relieve the stress! Check out my latest song called Octopus
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| Konscious said 381 days ago (November 5th, 2008) | |
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cool i like the added elements indeed, so far sounds good, i like the vibe of this one Check out my latest song called Rhythm of design
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| PrototypeEightyOne said 381 days ago (November 5th, 2008) | |
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yo thanks Kon i wasnt sure about the added parts in the verse. perticularly the synth that plays the quick 2 notes. im still not sure if it suits the feel of the track. Im going to experiment more with it tonight. Check out my latest song called Confusion
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| EEFliess said 373 days ago (November 13th, 2008) | |
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nice ambiance now my 2 cents...the percussion is a little on the tinny, treble-ish side, it (in my opinion) needs to go down a hair and the harpsichord and vox elements need upped a little...if you have a primary instrument here, and I am guessing (and I may be wrong) that it would be a combination of the keyboard and vox elements, everything else (bass, drums, rhythm section) can fill in the gaps sounding their best with a slightly lower volume...one criticism that I got in the past that I am addressing is my stuff audibly being a wall of sound, in other words, too much volume all at once...Overall a great little ambient piece, keep 'em coming! Check out my latest song called Rock and a Hard Place (With Adam Clarke) (extended, new drums)
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| PrototypeEightyOne said 373 days ago (November 13th, 2008) | |
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yo lol u had to pick the pick the most random incomplete track on my list to crit huh :P just playin, ive only put 2 hrs into this and posted it for that exact purpose.. thanks for taking the time and breaking this down. i agree on all counts, and will take it back to the lab..thanks eeeflies. Check out my latest song called Confusion
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TracyVosh
I like both versions of them. It's very hypnotic and a soothing antidote to a rough day.