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The Gate of Irony


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TracyVosh

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This one is old and needs work, I know - I think it's the flatland beat that's bothering me. but it's just a simple GB loop track that reminds me of some 80's cheesy good cop/bad cop show. lol. Any and all suggestions welcomed!
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Plays: 62
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Uploaded: Nov 15, 2008 - 12:39:08 PM
Last Updated: Nov 15, 2008 - 12:39:08 PM Last Played: Aug 09, 2009 - 06:12:46 AM
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Feter said 359 days ago (November 15th, 2008)
The Gate of Irony
this is neat ... this need for a vocal SO much ...
I m glad you added flute ..the drums I can relate
to the 80s ...the strings as well ...but all in all
if you enable us to hear your singing this will be
something ...thnx alot for sharin !!!!
TracyVosh said 358 days ago (November 16th, 2008)
Thank you!
I appreciate you taking the time, Feter...you are so good to me! Vocals are like the whipped cream topping of the song or possibly the chocolate syrup...I agree, it needs it, along with a cherry. Can you tell I'm hungry? lol
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smokey bacon jnr said 359 days ago (November 15th, 2008)
urm...
I love the piano, but that cheesy organ riff at the beginning spoils it for me! Get rid of the riff and add some vocals and this would be a killer. Flute is not bad though, and I love the bassline.
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TracyVosh said 358 days ago (November 16th, 2008)
Love
your name! I must go and check out your stuff. Thank you for listening and commenting, I appreciate it.
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WillyB said 358 days ago (November 15th, 2008)
...
I don't see a problem with the beat (that you mentioned in the description). Keep the bass and piano; and get yourself a mic, lot's of potential here!
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TracyVosh said 358 days ago (November 16th, 2008)
Thanks
Willy B! Yeah, I am working on vocals on a couple others too but it's all new for me so it's taking me longer than I expected. Thanks again for stopping in!
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dolby said 357 days ago (November 17th, 2008)
Yeah
I can see where you're coming from with the old cop theme idea -

You certainly have a knack with these loops! This is really good...

Phil
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TracyVosh said 357 days ago (November 17th, 2008)
Ahhhhh
Thank you! I do love playing with these loops, although I'm starting to feel somewhat stiffled by them when I can't find the sound I'm searching for...but it just pushes me even more! lol
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egobandit said 356 days ago (November 17th, 2008)
nice arranging
the change is well received. I agree some vocals over this would take it to a new level,I enjoyed it allot thanks!
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TracyVosh said 354 days ago (November 20th, 2008)
Thanks...
Thank you EB1! I appreciate that immensely.
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PrototypeEightyOne said 356 days ago (November 18th, 2008)
yo
cool track i like that flute that comes in right before your break at around 1:00. break was nice too, very laid back easy listening kind of tune. cool stuff.
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TracyVosh said 351 days ago (November 22nd, 2008)
Thanks...
Grazie mille POE! I'm pumped that you like it.
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Bob Rodgers said 355 days ago (November 19th, 2008)
I
really like this and this would sound great with some vocals.
Love your piano and the flute!

Great stuff!

Bob
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TracyVosh said 351 days ago (November 22nd, 2008)
Thank you
Dolby is actually working on vocals to this one. i can't wait to hear what he comes up with! He's gonna rock.
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kassia said 353 days ago (November 21st, 2008)
fun
Great work here - you put these together so well. I love the percussion in this. Can't wait to see where you take this. I love the change-up around the 1:00 mark. Cool stuff!
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TracyVosh said 351 days ago (November 22nd, 2008)
I'm so
glad that you like it and thank you for the wonderful compliment Kassia!
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jie said 353 days ago (November 21st, 2008)
cool
your right the chord sequence on the verses reminds me of something. nice vibe
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TracyVosh said 351 days ago (November 22nd, 2008)
Thanks
Cagney and Lacie maybe? lol - I'm dating myself here...
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DeputyDoofy said 352 days ago (November 21st, 2008)
Vocals ;
I, too, would like to hear some VoshyVocals. :)
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TracyVosh said 351 days ago (November 22nd, 2008)
Thank you
Doof...I appreciate that and I could try but I think Phil will do a much better job with the vocals than me.
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willbill808 said 351 days ago (November 23rd, 2008)
good track
This does have a pretty good feel to it. Nice mix levels between the bassline and piano.

haha I work mainly in hip hop, and I call this track good- Nice work.
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TracyVosh said 349 days ago (November 24th, 2008)
Thank you
I appreciate that. Even stranger is that I don't even listen to the type of music that I make. I would much rather be makin' hip hop but it's just not what comes out. Thanks for stopping by and listening.
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bronco said 290 days ago (January 23rd, 2009)
I agree
Lose the organ but the rest is wonderful. Nice compositional skills! Vocal would be cool.
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TracyVosh said 289 days ago (January 24th, 2009)
Mucho
appreciated Bronco! Thank you so very much for your feedback.
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