For a rough demo I liked it... I'm not sure what logic
express is, whether it's just a better version of GB-It still
sounded good. The harmonies are a little off at first but
seem to fall in place later. Your vocals I think were too dry
needed some efx (not that they were bad, they just
needed to blend more). I think with more work this will be
a great piece.

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Nice demo. You have a very pleasant voice. The build
with the piano works into the second verse, but when the
chorus hits, everything gets too soft, vocals and guitar; it
doesn't soar into the chorus like it should. Nice brek, too.
You have all the pieces here to create something really
nice. I like your baritone voice, the low edge to your
stylings.

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