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The Youngest and The Brightest


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Hello there.
This is my first work that I recorded on Garageband.
I wrote this song for my mate's birthday.
Hope you like it.

Cheers,
Jesushairdo
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Lyrics
the girl wakes up and sees
the sun is high up in the sky
the clock says it's already three
she knows it's the last night's wine

there is no one else in the house
she puts on her fresh white blouse
sees the mail box on her mobile
decides not to check in for a while

all the time she's been trying
to catch up with everybody running
her heart is about to give up
and she just stops and looks up

she's the youngest and the brightest
her pride is the guide to the rest
she's the star and we're the space
embrace her and watch her laid

the girl disappears suddenly
no good bye, no see you, just gone
for sisters and brothers she's a baby
worried and wonder what went wrong
 
the girl comes back while we search around
we all gather to catch her
all is good when she's around
her brother says and we love her

all is good when i'm around?
her brother's words sink in
well, all is good when everybody's around
she just smiles and takes in
Song Stats
Hits: 3979
Comments: 8
Fans: 5
Plays: 176
Downloads: 162
Votes: 13
Uploaded: Nov 12, 2004 - 12:29:57 PM
Last Updated: Nov 12, 2004 - 12:27:12 PM Last Played: Mar 24, 2017 - 02:13:23 PM
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Hardware:
Apple PB G4
Software:
Garageband
Comments
TobinMueller said 4719 days ago (November 16th, 2004)
Great songwriting, great arranging
Wonderful clear storytelling lyrics that morph into
something with depth and meaning; excellent use of
phrasing and rhymes too, and use of modern vocabulary
(like "mobile"). Your vocals aren't quite as effortless or as
in tunue as your other tracks, but such a nice
arrangement. Great kick into the full band, but the sound
of the drumset is so different than the rest, it doesn't
work to me ears. Great songwriting, great arranging,
great playing.
Check out my latest song called Momentary Undertow
mikkinylund said 4717 days ago (November 17th, 2004)
GREAT!
Wow...! All I got to say, this is very, very talented! Great
arrangmenat, great lyrics, and great song...

Love!!! :)
Check out my latest song called Rune XV
jesushairdo said 4713 days ago (November 21st, 2004)
GREAT!
wow! thanks for your nice comments!
but a lot of pressure on my next song...! hahaha.
Check out my latest song called Dawning
EdensEve said 4717 days ago (November 17th, 2004)
Can I say...
Quality writing is right! Yes, your vocals are not totally in tune, but if you can fix that, and a few minor production glitches, you need to be discovered, man. Can I say I knew you when? Or at least heard you before?
jesushairdo said 4713 days ago (November 21st, 2004)
Can I say...
thank you very much!
i havent played the guitar for a few years since
i bought my power book and recorded this first song.
but im really flattered by your comment!
it makes me want to practice more!
Check out my latest song called Dawning
_nderscore said 4717 days ago (November 17th, 2004)
well written
the lyrics & song composition are top notch. you put the
song together in a very enjoyable way, lots of movement.
excellent, excellent lyrics
Check out my latest song called glyd
Tomoakai said 4717 days ago (November 18th, 2004)
Lovely
The song's lyrics are lovely and heartfelt. I enjoyed this
song very much. Thanks for sharing.
Check out my latest song called Shes losing her bestfriend
Peter Greenstone said 4656 days ago (January 17th, 2005)
wow
I love how this builds. I like your singing on this even
though it goes flat here and there; sounds heartfelt and
honest. A little more attention to pronouncing some of
the words, in a few places you skip a word or maybe it
gets mixed with the one next to it. I like your accent; it's
just those places where some great lyrics are lost that I'd
like clearer. Great arrangement and performance. I agree
that the distorted drum that comes in later seems out of
place. Overall, a great song and performance. Just needs
some tweaks.
Check out my latest song called Iridium Flare (2013 Re-Release)
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Name: Yusuke Horiuchi
Location: Tokyo Tokyo Japan
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