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Hello there.
This is my first work that I recorded on Garageband.
I wrote this song for my mate's birthday.
Hope you like it.
Cheers,
Jesushairdo
This is my first work that I recorded on Garageband.
I wrote this song for my mate's birthday.
Hope you like it.
Cheers,
Jesushairdo
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Lyrics
the girl wakes up and sees
the sun is high up in the sky
the clock says it's already three
she knows it's the last night's wine
there is no one else in the house
she puts on her fresh white blouse
sees the mail box on her mobile
decides not to check in for a while
all the time she's been trying
to catch up with everybody running
her heart is about to give up
and she just stops and looks up
she's the youngest and the brightest
her pride is the guide to the rest
she's the star and we're the space
embrace her and watch her laid
the girl disappears suddenly
no good bye, no see you, just gone
for sisters and brothers she's a baby
worried and wonder what went wrong
the girl comes back while we search around
we all gather to catch her
all is good when she's around
her brother says and we love her
all is good when i'm around?
her brother's words sink in
well, all is good when everybody's around
she just smiles and takes in
the sun is high up in the sky
the clock says it's already three
she knows it's the last night's wine
there is no one else in the house
she puts on her fresh white blouse
sees the mail box on her mobile
decides not to check in for a while
all the time she's been trying
to catch up with everybody running
her heart is about to give up
and she just stops and looks up
she's the youngest and the brightest
her pride is the guide to the rest
she's the star and we're the space
embrace her and watch her laid
the girl disappears suddenly
no good bye, no see you, just gone
for sisters and brothers she's a baby
worried and wonder what went wrong
the girl comes back while we search around
we all gather to catch her
all is good when she's around
her brother says and we love her
all is good when i'm around?
her brother's words sink in
well, all is good when everybody's around
she just smiles and takes in
TobinMueller
Wonderful clear storytelling lyrics that morph into
something with depth and meaning; excellent use of
phrasing and rhymes too, and use of modern vocabulary
(like "mobile"). Your vocals aren't quite as effortless or as
in tunue as your other tracks, but such a nice
arrangement. Great kick into the full band, but the sound
of the drumset is so different than the rest, it doesn't
work to me ears. Great songwriting, great arranging,
great playing.