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This is another immature pop song from my early youth (about the same time as "Taste the Fire"). The Lyrics are cheesy... but I liked the jazzy guitar chords enough to rework the song. It's not really indicative of what I do these days - but I hope you get some enjoyment out of it.
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Lyrics
Dyin' like a Flower

Life reduced to memories and memories I crave
When I had a soul to give, to you I gladly gave
And now I’m bleeding tears, my life just drains away
I’d give this one last breath to be with you today

Love, I’m dying like a flower
That once had beauty and power
Just one thing to say – I thought that you needed me more
I’m scraping my heart off the floor
I’m scraping my heart off the floor

Though the knife twists deep inside, I love you just the same
And as I fight the freeze, I need your gentle flame
It seems I’m made for you, I’m breaking with the need
I’ll hold you close as life and on your eyes I’ll feed

All you see I give it freely
Take me in your loving arms
And steal this mind from madness
And heal this broken man
And trade me love for sadness
Kiss my leprous hands
Just one thing to say, I thought that you needed me more
I’m scraping my heart off the floor
I’m scraping my heart off the floor

No-one else can say they tasted life so sweet
Nothing else can be ever such a treat
Love take me blind, I do it all the time
You are my mind, for you I crave
And I can lose the time of day
I can make it all go away
But you are here to stay
Always here to stay

Life’s reduced to you and it’s you I crave
When I had a heart to give, I gave it away
Now I’m bleeding life, life just melts away
I just have one last hope, to win you back today

Just takes water for the flower
To give us beauty and power
Just one thing to say – I know that I need you much more
Won’t you just open the door

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Hits: 662
Comments: 23
Fans: 14
Plays: 45
Downloads: 36
Votes: 2
Uploaded: Dec 19, 2008 - 11:52:06 PM
Last Updated: Dec 19, 2008 - 11:52:06 PM Last Played: Aug 03, 2009 - 04:39:36 PM
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Hardware:
Danelectro Guitar, Strat Guitar, JBPlayer Bass, SM58 mic
Software:
GB
Comments
timothy devine said 342 days ago (December 20th, 2008)
c what u mean bout the Chords!
great tune
i dig the guitar when the hi hat get going
the over all sound is freekin hip
Bowie meets sting with a touch of luna
great 'thought that u needed me more'
love the whole
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LunaTrick said 329 days ago (January 2nd, 2009)
My first Sting comparison
Cheers Tim... glad you approve!
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Feter said 342 days ago (December 20th, 2008)
Dyin' Like a Flower
Hey ...this is cool ...very nice intro ..your voice hold alot of
soul ..I liked this .your early writing just great that I dont want
to think they are that old cos i ll feel bad about my own writing
at that time ...this song Rock ..great chords changes very nice mixing
Kudos ...thnx alot for sharin !!!!
LunaTrick said 329 days ago (January 2nd, 2009)
Thanks Feter
I can always count on you for encouragement!
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Reinholt56 said 342 days ago (December 20th, 2008)
Hi Daniel.....
I enjoy these older works that you allow us to listen to. They are excellent in every way and form a snapshot of where you were at another moment in time.

I particularly enjoyed the lyrics.

Take care.

Paul
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LunaTrick said 329 days ago (January 2nd, 2009)
Thanks Paul
This was different even for my past styles... but as you know... I don't like to be pigeon-holed!
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VicDiesel said 341 days ago (December 20th, 2008)
Cool sound
Flanger? Nice guitar chords.

The intro is too long for my taste. One quarter of what you have here is quite enough. After the first couple of chords those repetitions don't really add anything.

The low string on the guitar(s) also seems to get in the way of the bass. I would roll off a bunch of frequencies.


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LunaTrick said 329 days ago (January 2nd, 2009)
Thanks for your critical response
It helps to get specific feedback. Appreciate it!
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regulus said 341 days ago (December 20th, 2008)
I think
your flower in the picture need some water....... The song is cool, you have a lot of good songs. The structure on this is pretty rudimentary on the verses but the chorus lines are interesting. Quite a lot of change ups with the interjections of the various effects. Nice tune.......... Have a cool Yule....
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LunaTrick said 329 days ago (January 2nd, 2009)
Cheers Reg...
Feedback from people like you is all the water I need mate!
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WillyB said 340 days ago (December 22nd, 2008)
...
Hey LT, nice, creative track! I think you could use maybe a little more dynamic in the verses, either vocal, instruments or a little of both.
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LunaTrick said 329 days ago (January 2nd, 2009)
Fair point Willy...
Dynamics is everything!
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paul f. page said 337 days ago (December 24th, 2008)
Yes, but...
...YOU still enjoy this song, just as you did when you originally wrote it. Otherwise, you would not have posted it... I think it is mellow and I enjoy the chord changes and the subtle vocal harmonies you drop in now and again... I think it's a very enjoyable piece on many levels. My only suggestion would be to pump up the vocals so they are easier to hear. Cheezy lyrics!!!??? Don't put yourself down so much. These are as good as most...and probably better. I liked this song quite a lot. ... Maybe because I could understand its form and delivery. To me, that speaks volumes.
Peace.
Paul
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paul f. page said 337 days ago (December 24th, 2008)
Yes, but...
...YOU still enjoy this song, just as you did when you originally wrote it. Otherwise, you would not have posted it... I think it is mellow and I enjoy the chord changes and the subtle vocal harmonies you drop in now and again... I think it's a very enjoyable piece on many levels. My only suggestion would be to pump up the vocals so they are easier to hear. Cheezy lyrics!!!??? Don't put yourself down so much. These are as good as most...and probably better. I liked this song quite a lot. ... Maybe because I could understand its form and delivery. To me, that speaks volumes.
Peace.
Paul
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LunaTrick said 329 days ago (January 2nd, 2009)
Thanks Paul...
To me they are slightly cheesy... but as you wish. Appreciate your specific music feedback as always!
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mvh9591 said 337 days ago (December 24th, 2008)
Nice___
Enjoyed

Thanks for sharing,

mvh : )
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LunaTrick said 329 days ago (January 2nd, 2009)
Thanks
For listening and commenting!
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Drew Kopr said 332 days ago (December 30th, 2008)
Nice
Very nice composition, vocals, and lyrics. Very enjoyable.
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LunaTrick said 329 days ago (January 2nd, 2009)
Thanks Drew
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MarkHolbrook said 321 days ago (January 9th, 2009)
Wow wow wow
I love the sound of that guitar! Daniel is there any instrument you don't play?
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LunaTrick said 318 days ago (January 12th, 2009)
Yes Mark
TUBA!
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segiperkasa said 314 days ago (January 16th, 2009)
cool song..
cool song... with some cool guitar works...
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LunaTrick said 312 days ago (January 19th, 2009)
Glad you liked
Your guitar is fantastic!
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