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| DeputyDoofy said 1833 days ago (November 19th, 2004) | |
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Industrial-ambient Thanks for your response. I appreciate constructive feedback. I don't know if I'll ever get around to making the fixes/changes to this specific tune, but your comments do not fall on deaf ears. It's something to consider for future tunes. I'm forever learning. :D Thanks for listening!!--- I said don't disturb me when I'm cleaning my room. Check out my latest song called DW — Don't F with Time
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| _nderscore said 1833 days ago (November 19th, 2004) | |
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well-structured lots of changeups & redirections. some really great sounds/compositions. has sort of a dancy/happy feel. i really like it, but in the name of criticism, i would say it does get a little repetitious at times. i think if you went back in & started messing it up where things noticeably repeat, you would generate another level of intricacy & interest. 'nice song' :D Check out my latest song called glyd
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| packosmokes said 1832 days ago (November 19th, 2004) | |
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It's a brilliant bed I like the mood you've created and it's got tha stompy industrial beat! I'd puch for more variation and possibly the addition of musical element or two. The thing about industrial instrumentals is they somehow need to keep your attention without changing too much. I'd recommend listening to some stuff by VNV Nation, they're a little poppier, but they're very good at keeping instrumentals "alive" so that they don't feel too repetitive. However, it's got a great hook and overall I enjoy your track! Check out my latest song called With You
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| MissChaos said 1832 days ago (November 19th, 2004) | |
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Hey, not bad at all! I think you've done a wonderful job creating voices with synth instruments - almost goulish sounding. Perfect compliment for such a dark song. I like the way the sounds weave into each other. You've done a nice job with the production. I'd like to hear a bit more dynamics in this. Nice job! Oh, and what the heck is the song art? I can't make out the words... where are my glasses?! Miss Chaos Check out my latest song called Mama Cries - Album Version (MJRF)
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| TobinMueller said 1830 days ago (November 22nd, 2004) | |
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Funky transformations Great journey thru electronica transformations. Some very hip moments. this really drove for me. Loved the funky synths. Nice track. Check out my latest song called Forge A New Life (MJRF)
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| DeputyDoofy said 1830 days ago (November 22nd, 2004) | |
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Thanks! Everyone, thanks for the feedback (both the nice ones and the critiquing ones). Every bit helps! :D Check out my latest song called DW — Don't F with Time
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There are some good vibes in this piece, but I think it sort of lacks a central character or intent. The individual components have a compatible industrial flavor and the mix is balanced. It just didn't connect for me in an emotional sense. Maybe shorter with stronger gestures? Maybe add some synths for background texture and chord movement? (6-6-6-6)