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Cheesecube

 Genre: Acoustic
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This song was written for a girl I know and really really like.. It's like the third song I've written completely by myself, and only the second one with lyrics and I don't have much experience so please tell me what you think of it because I'm not sure if it's good enough to give to her.
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Lyrics
I never will forget the way you made me feel that day when
You kissed me on the lips and watched me skip away
The world began to spin didn't know which was which
I smiled and I laughed and I began to wish for
You.
I don't really care today who else has known the bliss or
the comfort I get from your bubble gum kisses
A little girl's laughter is heard from your eyes
Like a day on the playground with bright sunny skies
The school bell is ringing the kids run inside
But maybe you and I could just stay here and hide
I knew
My heart belongs to you
It's true I knew
My heart belongs to you
Like a day on the playground with bright sunny skies
A little girls laughter is heard from your eyes
The school bell is ringing the kids run inside
But maybe you and I could just stay here and hide
A little girl's laughter is heard from your eyes
Like a day on the playground with bright sunny skies
The school bell is ringing the kids run inside
But maybe you and I could just stay here and hide
Song Stats
Hits: 1531
Comments: 3
Fans: 3
Plays: 64
Downloads: 79
Votes: 0
Uploaded: Jan 29, 2009 - 03:30:26 PM
Last Updated: Jan 23, 2009 - 06:35:55 PM Last Played: May 15, 2016 - 05:15:25 AM
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Comments
Komrade K said 3161 days ago (January 29th, 2009)
A lovely song
You've got a way with a tune and a lyric that really hooked me in - I liked your voice as well, it has both strength and fragility. Obviously the recording's a little hissy and the guitar could be more confident but It's definitely good enough to give, I'd be happy if someone wrote a song like this for me!

KK


PS - Cheesecube is such a great name!
Check out my latest song called Urra Moor/The Leckie/Reel CJ/Willafjord
Cheesecube said 3161 days ago (January 29th, 2009)
Thank you, sir!
Thank you, very much; I really appreciate the input.
Check out my latest song called Time is Nigh
Char said 3161 days ago (January 29th, 2009)
Very sweet.
Definitely, a very precious gift. I know it will be well received. Thanks for sharing.
Check out my latest song called Bound, v2. w Music by Dirigent
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