Cant You See

kinane

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My first try at Garageband. As you can hear, I'm a "triple non-threat" when it comes to signing, playing and engineering! Other than that, I think the song has some garage rock charm to it. Please let me know what you think! Mike

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Lyrics

My heart beats so fast
I don't know if I will last the night
with you close by

Every time you speak
My head gets so weak I can hardly see
Look what you've done to me

You're giving me something
Can't you see
I can't wait that long, girl
Come back to me
I've tried to be patient
But somethings going wrong
I've waited too long

When you walk close by
I can't hold inside my love for you
What can I do?

Song Stats

Hits: 572
Comments: 19
Fans: 8
Plays: 68
Downloads: 39
Votes: 2
Uploaded: Jan 29, 2009 - 04:18:54 PM
Last Updated: Jan 31, 2009 - 12:40:00 PM Last Played: Nov 16, 2009 - 12:25:29 AM

Song License

Creative Commons License:
NoDerivs-NonCommercial

Song Actions

Hardware:

Rickenbacker 330, Danelectro DC-12, Danelectro Longhorn Bass, SM58 mic

Software:

Garageband

Comments

Feter	Feter said 299 days ago (January 29th, 2009)
	Cant You See WO Mike this is way too cool ...great rockin guitar sound .. loved your singing work ...very much beatlish and is coool !!! man the mixin is good ...all in thsi song Rock ..thnx alot for sharin !!!! Check out my latest song called A Night With Feter feat'(Roxylee sloparts crissew johnwhitehead and Yamin AL Yamani )

kinane	kinane said 294 days ago (February 4th, 2009)
	Thanks Thanks Feter! Very kind words, I just love this garageband thing. Makes it easy for those of us technically challenged! Much appreciated! Check out my latest song called Slow Twitch

thetiler

thetiler said 299 days ago (January 29th, 2009)

Enjoy
the beatles kind of feel to this, especially the way it starts off. But like the singing as well. Brings me back to the Beatles time period to me ! Which hits the heart strings. Like this Like the chugga feel to this. But the singing is nice. Cool pop beatles beats.

Enjoyed in that pop way! of yesteryear, would be nice to hear this on radio !

Check out my latest song called The Bluebird Cafe (with two other guest)

kinane	kinane said 294 days ago (February 4th, 2009)
	radio absolutely a liverpool vibe going. Listening to too much (if there is a such a thing) Rubber Soul. thanks much for the post. Check out my latest song called Slow Twitch

racerat	racerat said 299 days ago (January 30th, 2009)
	welcome welcome to MJ. Nice start. Looking forward to hearing more from you. Won't say the 'b' word like the other two, but you know what it is....good production chops. keep it up. Check out my latest song called Frank's Song

kinane	kinane said 294 days ago (February 4th, 2009)
	thanks Wow, I've never been accused of having good production chops! I basically bang away until it's 'good enough'. Thanks so much for the nice feedback. Check out my latest song called Slow Twitch

fabien0784	fabien0784 said 299 days ago (January 30th, 2009)
	hey, this rocks ! Congratulations. You've given us something ! The synchro with the voive and the sound is very good. Cool work. You should start a real band right away ! Thanks. Check out my latest song called Blues du 11ème

kinane	kinane said 294 days ago (February 4th, 2009)
	muchos gracias Thanks for the post. I think my wife would have something to say about me starting a band anytime soon, but you never know! Check out my latest song called Slow Twitch

GermanGhost	GermanGhost said 298 days ago (January 31st, 2009)
	Song Catchy! I really like this. :D Check out my latest song called God's Miracles

kinane	kinane said 294 days ago (February 4th, 2009)
	Thanks! Thanks for the kind words! Check out my latest song called Slow Twitch

sschedra	sschedra said 288 days ago (February 10th, 2009)
	Mike You self-deprecating nerd! This is Great!! . .. and those guitars (sigh!)! You bring me back to 1964 (and yes I was there). Keep it up man, its wonderful, Stephen ps non-triple threat indeed! More like triple-double. Somebody cover the white guy! Check out my latest song called Love's Fingers Fall

kinane	kinane said 288 days ago (February 10th, 2009)
	Thanks! Thanks so much for the feedback! It's definitely my favorite era without a doubt. Those songs are timeless. Check out my latest song called Slow Twitch

jhoban19

jhoban19 said 285 days ago (February 12th, 2009)

no way that's you Mike!!
I've heard you sing, and that ain't you!! just kidding cuz. that was great- maybe you can sing that one at the wedding?? not sure if I can get security clearance to get it on the program (I'm not in control of anything), but we'll see!! seriously, that's a really good song..... I'm inspired to get back to that notebook of half-written songs sitting under the coffee table.....

kinane	kinane said 285 days ago (February 13th, 2009)
	cousin what the heck are you doing on this site? Glad you liked. look forward to hearing your stuff soon! Check out my latest song called Slow Twitch

8piscean8	8piscean8 said 285 days ago (February 13th, 2009)
	Super Duper This is excellent! Great first post. Love the vibe. Great sounds, great voice! Super harmony vocals. My only gripe is that the volume raises unnaturally going into the "You're giving me something" part. And wow, your wife let's you have 43 guitars!? Great wife you got there. Check out my latest song called The End

kinane	kinane said 285 days ago (February 13th, 2009)
	thanks! Youre right about the rise in volume. I think my vox are louder there. I'm going to try and fix that. Also, the drum loop for that part is a little 'bigger' as well and could be contributing. As for the wife she's great and smart, she makes me keep them in the basement out of site. Check out my latest song called Slow Twitch

8piscean8	8piscean8 said 284 days ago (February 14th, 2009)
	Better Better the basement than not at all! Check out my latest song called The End

JadedWish	JadedWish said 282 days ago (February 16th, 2009)
	Love it! I love this song! Just my kind of feel. Very catchy :) Check out my latest song called Sacrifice