Another Day

Cashed-In

Genre: Acoustic

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You were there, and now im gone.
Everything in this world seems to grey.
Everything fades to black, you know i just want that day back.
Just to see your smile for another day.
Why are you so far away? I just wish i could see you for another day.

I never asked for that much.
But that's not true.
The only thing i wish for is to spend another day with you.

Why are you so far away?
Just wish i could see you, for another day.

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Hits: 522
Comments: 11
Fans: 12
Plays: 142
Downloads: 28
Votes: 1
Uploaded: Feb 14, 2009 - 06:01:32 PM
Last Updated: Apr 30, 2009 - 04:01:38 PM Last Played: Nov 23, 2009 - 11:21:30 AM

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Willywagga	Willywagga said 283 days ago (February 14th, 2009)
	Really like it Love what you've done so far. Very nice voice. Looking forward to when you've finished it. Great Check out my latest song called The Jes on Sea Road

Feter	Feter said 283 days ago (February 15th, 2009)
	Another Day very nice ...great singing ..loved the strummin ... not sure about the strings and drums ...maybe a bass with harmonies ..nice writing ...willin to hear the final take ...thnx alot for sharin !!! Check out my latest song called A Night With Feter feat'(Roxylee sloparts crissew johnwhitehead and Yamin AL Yamani )

Elevator_Funk	Elevator_Funk said 283 days ago (February 15th, 2009)
	sounds good could stand to hear the vocals pushed forward more and the strings pushed farther behind to provide ambience but not overpower the vocals. Check out my latest song called Post Nasal Drip

Cashed-In	Cashed-In said 282 days ago (February 15th, 2009)
	Big thanks Thank you everyone for the feedback. I wrote this song and recorded in a matter of 2 hours. Its Just a demo and i will deff. upload the finished track. thanks again Check out my latest song called Empty Bird Cage

mtransue	mtransue said 210 days ago (April 28th, 2009)
	nice nice piece so far, I was thinking a vocal harmony would sound really nice when you come in with the falsetto. Thanks for sharing Check out my latest song called The Antibody

Char	Char said 210 days ago (April 28th, 2009)
	Lovely. Nice melody and a very good singing voice. I would like to see the the lyrics. Thank you. Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

Trillian	Trillian said 209 days ago (April 30th, 2009)
	I like your music very much when you get a minute post the lyrics, cause it's always good to read along - get the subtleties of the images in the poetry of a song.

musichead

musichead said 208 days ago (April 30th, 2009)

sorry to say...
Sorry to say I do the same thing...unfinished song...But in the last 2 songs...Ive been the worst. I now finish the song before posting. Starting on the next post. This a really good song and not bad demo. I would have thought that was your sound if you hadnt said anything about it not be unfinished. Still work the drums out a bit..are you going to add bass? It is a really good song!

Check out my latest song called Lets Take a Holiday

saymme	saymme said 206 days ago (May 3rd, 2009)
	tx Wonderful wakeupsong.....beautiful melancholi....& lyrics.......wish your voice was more 'forward'...but maybe cause its not it gets that special feel..tx : )

Alannah

Alannah said 206 days ago (May 3rd, 2009)

My advice? .....
... turn up that vox track some ..... good vocal ... it seems somewhat buried in the mix tho .... track has some good promise .... small production issues .... a nice little chorus line would also really sound great on this I think .... ok ... my two cents worth .. nice tune ... definitely work on it a bit ... finish it!

Check out my latest song called I'm Drownin' - Smokey VW (feat Alannah) + Outtaorbit

Calchas	Calchas said 200 days ago (May 9th, 2009)
	Off and running! Nice job Ken. Enjoyed. Let me know when you've finished this. Be well friend! Check out my latest song called IT'S NOT THE SAME

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Name: Ken

my name is Ken, I will be putting some songs from my Debut album " Another empty Bird Cage" on here for people to critique and listen to, and hopefully enjoy. ... [see more]

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