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I wrote this poem about a coffee shop waitress I asked out. Twice. She told me no.
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Lyrics
She’s cinnamon on the tongue,
and deep lung air,
the space between heartbeats,
and dreamless seconds. She’s
gravity and bent light, years of inescapable
regret. She’s a bruised tattoo and a muffled note
sounding sad negation, baby skin, and
straight flush vertigo; queen high,
aphasia, and too much wine.
The beginning’s whispered word and
insomnia. She’s finish line sweat
and denied kisses, dew wet roses and ropes
bathed in starlight. She’s candle wax and
burnt offerings, a razor wrist, the atom split,
lightning dance and a tear of joy. She’s a child
tickled too long and quivering lip.
She’s dragon chasing
smoke raised in prayer, a C4 bunny,
three to a match and a bullet;
to whom it may concern, sucking
chest wound heartbreak. She’s
crime in a $4 T-shirt and yesterday’s
shorts. She’s her smile and walk,
cricket comfort and lumbering grace,
electrochemical shock therapy. She’s
the fast right hand captured in unnatural acts.
She’s unclean thoughts, and unrepentance,
salvation offered only in darkness. She’s
the better half of a timeless equation, π
factored past infinity, an easy answer
to an impossible problem. She’s unknown
and unknowable, an unopened gift
gathering dust,
another man’s name on the tag.









penguinsocks
i saw the picture in the mystery picks, was curious and
checked it out. i read the lyrics first - impressive! i like
them a lot. i didn't expect it to be read but it's a poem,
like you said, duh.. i should have known. it reminds me of
gudkarma.. you share a similar, fine detail of speech and
syllable. i'm not too fond of the haunting moans and other
female vocals in the background, but they create an
escalating feeling of tension and obsession. now i feel all
poetic. hmm.
thank you for inspiring me to not only listen but also
comment for the first time in a few months. (been too
busy.) i'll have to check out the rest of your stuff soon.