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Whacked (2004) [Explicit] by cjorgensen [Email]

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Uploaded: Nov 26, 2004 - 07:49:53 PM
Last Updated: Nov 25, 2004 - 08:34:48 PM



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Description:
Trying to update some of my older poems, using my new machine.

Lyrics:
And you...

Crimson killers rose from a pool
of warm coagulating blood to slay
the lives of any that came their way.
Dead men cracked the virginal skulls
of children and laughed as they ate
gray matter like sweet nutmeats. (Laughter)
There was always laughter!
Putrid carcasses of flesh blazed
in a pyre of the recently dead.

And you...

An umblemished feminine face broke
into a cracked grin of reality/insanity.
Burning liquid flowed among the damned
and perhaps God looked down upon them,
but only in perverse pleasure
as the throng yearned for death.

And you...

Ravens ate the eyes of babies as Saints
tortured innocent witches of Satan.
Boys raped boys in the wet earth
where their ancestors lay sleeping.
And the laughter came again.

And you...

Orgasms and alcohol conceive a child
in a black marble graveyard of Nazis.
Abortion rips the life of the antichrist
proving its worth 'till The Second Coming!
God is an iron!

And you...

She was found face down in her own vomit,
her wrists cut and bleeding to kill.
And perhaps God looked down. And laughed
at the umbilicus joining stillborn and vagina.

And you...

And you try to wake, to escape judgment,
but you have already been declared guilty.
There is no sodomy or rape that you do not
deserve a thousand times over. You pray
but can no longer even hear laughter.


Hardware:
Telex USB mic and a eMac

Software:
Garage Band
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Unlikeable? (but is that the point) &mdash 01/25/05 - 09:49:41 AM
I really like whacked stuff. I found this hard to like. Man, I wish the adrenalin of violent music, but not the real violence? You know? Great poetry of the Apokolips. Or was that about Superman? (Hmm, maybe that's the problem, Superman delusions?) Great imagery. Ok, I'm creeped out enough now. Bye.

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EWWWWW &mdash 04/20/05 - 09:07:14 AM
This is best after lunch. Way after. Good job with visual
imagery it is beyond anything I have ever seen nor heard.
I would like to hear this one made more melodic and
harmonic. But perhaps that is the twisted side of me,
which I am sure you understand. Thanks for sharing.

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EWWWWW &mdash 04/20/05 - 09:07:14 AM
This is best after lunch. Way after. Good job with visual
imagery it is beyond anything I have ever seen nor heard.
I would like to hear this one made more melodic and
harmonic. But perhaps that is the twisted side of me,
which I am sure you understand. Thanks for sharing.

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