wish you had printed the lyrics though. great simple
rendition. fantastic vocals. that you on piano as well?
great job! 9-9-9-9

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Thanks Cantor! This was my first go on Macjams...love the feedback. Yes, it is
me on the piano too.

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wish you had printed the lyrics though. great simple
rendition. fantastic vocals. that you on piano as well?
great job! 9-9-9-9

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Love the clarity of your voice.

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But I'd love to hear you sing through a good mike with
some good EQ. Try using a pop screen in front of the
mike to get get rid of the puffs. You can buy one or use
an old pair nylons stretched over a coat hanger. I loved
everything else about the song.

JG

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Selena, I can't help but sing along when I listen to this. I
can hear a great harmony in the last section.

Well done. Great song. Beautiful piano. Keep it up!

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That would be a great touch. Nolan, add the harmonies and (with Selena's
kind permission) post them. That would be a terrific combination.

Anyways, very nice playing. The tip about the pop screen is a great one. I've
got to make one for myself. The song is beautiful and your singing is spot
on. Very strong first post! Keep 'em coming.

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very nice melody and lyrics. i really like the multpile meanings of "folded" that weave through my mind as you sing, mainly caused by the way you sing each line and by the simple ambiguity of the lyric. you never tell us how your situtation resolves, so that we are caught, like you, bewteen emotions and decisions. i also like very much the straightforward style and no frills presentation. looking forward to more.

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This is a very nice song, especially the expressive range
and quality of your voice, along with the harmonious
chord progressions of the piano.

The longer-held notes of the piano were a bit
compressed, i.e. slightly quickened, which threw the
otherwise steady rhythm off just a tad. You might want to
tighten that up to create more "steadiness".

Your voice is lovely and I enjoyed the way your melody
jumped around, covering an interesting range of notes,
with a clear quality and well in tune.

There were a couple of times on certain louder words in
your vocals which sounded slightly distorted (clipping).
But otherwise this was quite well mixed.

VERY nice song -- good job overall!

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Totally awesome. Incredible voice texture. 4x9 !

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this song amazed me. Wonderful, because you didnt use any loops. But really I heard this song and this was amazing. How much piano experience do you have?

Anyway, your vocal work is excellent - Great Job!

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