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| guygrooves said 240 days ago (March 31st, 2009) | |
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Would like to see...... this get a re record. kingbee makes some strong points. Your vocals should be the centerpiece of this song. You should drop all but the acoustic rhythm guitar and your vocals, and offer this up for a collaboration, if you are so inclined. This has such a powerful lyric and great vocal I am sure more than a couple people would love to join you on this. It is a great song with way to much going on in it right now. You sound a bit like "Everlast" only better in my opinion. Peace Guy Check out my latest song called Last Day Here
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| maxjsl37 said 236 days ago (April 5th, 2009) | |
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Interesting Like the concept. Like the layering guitars. Needs some additional mixing and mastering. Great vocals, fit the song perfectly. Nice job! Check out my latest song called National Bastard
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kingbee
Good song from a good angle
Like your approach to the subject.
The only thing I would say is it feels a bit busy with the guitars.
I would take the lead guitars out when your singing ( it detracts from the great words) and then bring them in inbetween verses..then with the middle eight have the lead guitar in the right headphone come in, do a bit and then the acoustic in the left headphone could come in and do it's bit.
It just feels like a bit like everyone's fighting for space within the song and it may open it up a bit more if the different components are allowed their turn to shine
I hope you take all that in a positive way.
I like you voice, nice world weary gravelly feel to it.
Good stuff