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My First


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Trooper7

 Genre: Ballad
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Written when I was 17...the age I was when I had my heart crushed by my first love. I debated about changing the original tune and lyrics but decided to keep them true to the original melody I wrote back then. GB has allowed me to put in the strings and harmonies I couldn't do back then. The song isn't quite where I'd like it to be but I do like how it's coming along.
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Lyrics
Its been over two years
Since we met
That night so long ago
I never will forget

We were on the dance floor
when we first kissed
My head said no
But my heart it said yes

Here I am
Sitting by the phone
And here I am
Wondering if your home

You were oh so innocent
And oh so beautiful
When we spent time together
The world stood still

And we had our moments
Some were filled with tears
We shared our secrets and dreams
Our hopes and fears

Then after a while
Things started to change
The time we spent together
Wasn't quite the same

And when it was over
And you were on your way
I only hoped that we would
Meet again some day

Here I am
Sitting by the phone
And here I am
Wondering if your home

Chorus

Susan where have you gone
Susan time goes on and on


Susan where have you gone
Susan time goes on and on
Song Stats
Hits: 419
Comments: 5
Fans: 5
Plays: 36
Downloads: 26
Votes: 1
Uploaded: Apr 06, 2009 - 03:10:48 AM
Last Updated: Apr 06, 2009 - 03:41:07 AM Last Played: Nov 17, 2009 - 08:52:02 PM
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Comments
MarkHolbrook said 234 days ago (April 6th, 2009)
Hey
I'm loving the piano in this... Super! Once again your vocals are really nice.

I'm off to listen to your others!
Check out my latest song called Never Say Goodbye - Bond Challenge
thetiler said 234 days ago (April 6th, 2009)
Thanks mark
for the heads up at the forum. Like the pop feel of this, nice singin.

Like the violin backdrop and orchestra feel. Has a nice pop orchestra feel. LIke the high register vocals etc.

This really one of the best of this style. Especially when I hear the build up of the orchestra as it continues.

Quite something @ A great find and again, the power of the forum heads up !
Check out my latest song called I't Been A While
Moviz said 234 days ago (April 6th, 2009)
Nice voice
you've got there and I like the song and the way you performed it, great arrangement and the piano sounds great, cheers M
Check out my latest song called Come Back Billie
sschedra said 224 days ago (April 16th, 2009)
Songs of youth
I am a sucker for these. I don't care if they are from our youth, I can still taste the longing and the loss. This stuff is so universal. Another fine production and performance. I love the piano work as well.

Stephen
Check out my latest song called Love's Fingers Fall
FaresDannan said 196 days ago (May 14th, 2009)
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man am really stunned of what u r composing
i liked the lyric alot
and the electric solo is suitable i admit it
and when you say Susan i feel like am flying lol
i know this sounds so gay but am not dont worry lol
man awesome as always keep on
looking forward for an album release :)
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Started out playing drums at about 8. Joined the school music programs. After school I played in a bar band for a couple of years. If you know who Bud Marr is he was our bass player...lot's of interesting stories. Then life happened and I got a caree... [see more]

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Genre Info
A ballad is a story in a song, usually a narrative song or poem. It is a rhythmic saga of a past affair, which may be heroic, romantic or satirical, political (affected by the previous three types mentioned, refers to either glorifying the exploits o

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