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Negative Space (First Verse)


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ElPeruano

 Genre: Hip Hop-Rap
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This is a song I made using some tasty GB Jam Pack loops. I wrote something one day and recorded it immediately. its been sitting around since. I plan on adding a second verse at some point. Let me know what you guys think!
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Lyrics
the blank sheet stares, negative space
so i write between the lines of this notebook page
i erase, scratch out scriptures, taste
the ink of a thought that I think i've misplaced
i've forgotten so much scenery
so many smiles, so many symphonies and memories
holding on to the semblance of identity
i've changed, but I want you to remember me
and what we'll never be
and what will never be
nothings given and I don't believe in destiny
treat time like my enemy
but time steadily wins
and i find that I readily grin?
what happened again?
when was that day
when I dreamt of sirens and everything changed?
my notebook contains pavement and frost
flames and ink blots of things lost
i wrote a poem once to describe the soul
a term filled with irony for one who's alone
but I linger on the lyrics of a song I never finished
and I change the ending to a story never written
just beginning to appreciate the blank page
put my pen to the motion of a new day...
Song Stats
Hits: 381
Comments: 9
Fans: 6
Plays: 51
Downloads: 0
Votes: 0
Uploaded: Apr 12, 2009 - 11:17:18 PM
Last Updated: Apr 12, 2009 - 11:17:18 PM Last Played: Nov 03, 2009 - 12:38:24 AM
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Hardware:
Behringer XM5800 mic, Art Tube Preamp, M-Audio Fasttrack
Software:
GB
Comments
PrototypeEightyOne said 208 days ago (April 13th, 2009)
Yo
nice track, very deep with emotion. Your voice and flow is so damn smooth man, and works perfectly with this style of beat. Good stuff
Check out my latest song called Planet of Prototypes (mj space race 2009)
ElPeruano said 138 days ago (June 22nd, 2009)
thanks prototype
really appreciate the feedback man. i checked out MoonTalk again! keep in touch
Check out my latest song called Requiem (w/ TNTrio)
Diviner said 208 days ago (April 13th, 2009)
Lovely track
Love the beat, its very skippy and cheerful which opposes the sad and introspective cello/violin sound. Very nicely put together, love the dichotomy of the music. Your lyrics and rap style is something I always look forward to, its very unique and I enjoy listening to what and how you say. Nice one El.
Check out my latest song called Space Program (Space Race 2009)
ElPeruano said 138 days ago (June 22nd, 2009)
:)
thanks so much for the kind words good sir. you are too nice!
Check out my latest song called Requiem (w/ TNTrio)
Konscious said 207 days ago (April 14th, 2009)
Props
This is sick... the beat is dope for laying down a meaningful vibe, feeling the violin especially. The lyrics are smoothly intertwined to the rhythm of your soul, refreshing imagery found on a once blank page... I would love to hear another verse on this.
Check out my latest song called Sense of Crisis
ElPeruano said 138 days ago (June 22nd, 2009)
thanks konscious
hope life is treating you well my friend. as for a second verse we will have to see if the muse will pay me a visit...
Check out my latest song called Requiem (w/ TNTrio)
spitlogic said 204 days ago (April 18th, 2009)
Cant listen
Reading the lyrics here is exactly what I expect. Very intuative and thought provoking. Your lyrics are always very vivid and full of description. Well done.
Check out my latest song called Verbal Watlz feat. Fresh Master Def
ElPeruano said 138 days ago (June 22nd, 2009)
spittttt
from a great lyricist like yourself that means a lot sir. thank you. hope all is well with you.
Check out my latest song called Requiem (w/ TNTrio)
Clambake said 135 days ago (June 26th, 2009)
Brave one
you are, the separation you allow is bold and beautiful. Great space you put me in, thank you.
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I'm a 20 year old college student that loves music but never seems to have the time to do it justice. I dont really know what I really want out of life yet. Musical experience is fairly limited. I played piano since I was five off and on. I quit in h... [see more]

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