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Not Just Another Girl


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diblit

 Genre: Pop (mainstream)

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good times, and good memories
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Lyrics
when i first saw you my heart, skipped a beat
now my knees they wont stop shaking
from the ink on your wrist to our first kiss
i know that you're the real thing


the sand in my shoes and your broken toe
the way that you wrinkle your beautiful nose
you took off your hat and smiled at me
couldn't get any better...


when i first saw you, i knew i wanted you
but i didn't even know your name
then so sweetly you sang your song to me
each day i love seeing your pretty face


the sand in my shoes and your broken toe
the way that you wrinkle your beautiful nose
you took off your hat and smiled at me
couldn't get any better, then you kissed

the nights grow colder but you love the rain
i'll be your shoulder, an love you the same
sit on this wall here an ill keep you safe
each moment with you is a better day


is the moon even out tonight, i dont know
take my hand and lets start the show
for all the people that aren't here
our silhouettes on the stage,

holding hands, your holding my heart
watching us play. and we're watching the stars
come with me and lets dance in the rain,
till the sun breaks into day

you're smile lights up my world, hope you know
in my arms ill keep you from the cold
your head on my chest, a love so clear
ill stay and hold you, no more fears


the sand in my shoes and your broken toe
the way that you wrinkle your beautiful nose
you took off your hat and smiled at me
couldn't get any better, then you kissed me

the nights grow colder but you love the rain
i'll be your shoulder, an love you the same
sit on this wall here an ill keep you safe
each moment with you is a better day
Song Stats
Hits: 1464
Comments: 13
Fans: 5
Plays: 37
Downloads: 0
Votes: 1
Uploaded: Apr 14, 2009 - 10:27:50 PM
Last Updated: Apr 15, 2009 - 04:18:06 PM Last Played: Dec 21, 2012 - 05:20:44 PM
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i recorded the guitar and vox through a crumby mic i have, so they dont sound very good.. and i think the guitars are even out of tune, ahha

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Comments
Relic67 said 1495 days ago (April 14th, 2009)
well done
nice song! like the melody, and the mix of high/low guitars and piano.
really cool. you should post the lyrics.
regarding the vocal recording: use of a pop filter might help?



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diblit said 1494 days ago (April 15th, 2009)
thanks

thanks relic, glad you like it
i just posted the lyrics, if you'd like to check them out they're up

pop filter? cool, ill have to look into tha
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johnwhitehead said 1495 days ago (April 15th, 2009)
Yeah
really nicely constructed piece. Nicely written song, and I love the evolving arrangement, overlapping vocal lines, folk/rock/pop/grunge atmosphere.

Sweet sentiments with a rockin' pulse that's very catchy.

Keep 'em comin!
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diblit said 1494 days ago (April 15th, 2009)
=)
thanks for the love
im glad you enjoyed it

im currently working on more of them too
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Char said 1494 days ago (April 15th, 2009)
Nice lyrics.
Charming method of singing with all the variation and quick change. Pretty song. Background hum could be realligned in one or two places. That distracted me a little. Thanks.
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diblit said 1494 days ago (April 15th, 2009)
thanks
im glad you like it

theres a few places where the tempo/timing are off, but i wanted to get it up right away
im not sure what you mean by the hum.. i put a track of "rain" in the background, is that what you mean?
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davisamerica said 1494 days ago (April 15th, 2009)
what a
great song !
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diblit said 1484 days ago (April 25th, 2009)
=)
thanks davisamerica!!
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Godchaser said 1494 days ago (April 16th, 2009)
good stuff
Although i think the piece could be a tad tighter in the vocal department,the song is well crafted as well as performed.Strong lyrical qualities and very reminiscent on many fronts with the band Coldplay.Good stuff!

Blessings,
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diblit said 1484 days ago (April 25th, 2009)
wow thanks!
i'm still learning how to sing, and making sure i hit the right notes and all that good stuff.. im glad you like it
thanks for listening
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apb said 1490 days ago (April 19th, 2009)
I have never heard anyone ..
.. more in need of a pop-shield/filter. It was really jarring with your fine vocals! which on the whole were marvelous but seemed to be less confident in spots. The guitars sound quite mandolin like- might be good played on a mandolin ..hmm. Arrangement wise I would go for that wall of sound style of guitar thumping that you have started to hit apon around 2:17 .. everytime the chorus appears... if your going for radio friendly .. that would be my advice...and .. there u just read it. lol.
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diblit said 1484 days ago (April 25th, 2009)
=)
thanks apb,
thanks for the advice, its always welcome
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ste said 1466 days ago (May 14th, 2009)
Nice
I reckon this would be even better if you got a band together and tried playing it live. Lovely feel about the whole piece.
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