great bassoon sound shame it loses it in the verse.
interesting lyrics but structure could be more engaging.

keep it up

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That sound isnt a bassoon (if I gather your meaning) it is the Fitch cello which
I downloaded free from this site. A great sounding instrument. I worked on
this song for a while and I know it is missing something important. Thank
you for the comments.

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Very brit sound. The vocals could use some work in my
oppinion. I would have also liked to see the lyrics writeen
out. It also seems like there is a little too much distortion
on everything.

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I have an aversion to printing the lyrics. I think they should be heard and not
read. But that's just me. I also make a lot of them up as I sing them so I don't
have them writen down in advance. I realise that the vocals don't sound real
great because I am using a bad mic, but I don't think the whole song sounds
all distorted. I have distortion on the guitar (created in gb). I'm not the best
mixer . . . . thanks for the comments.

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sort of reminded me of spiritualized -- but with different
vocal delivery. would have liked stronger drums -
especially on the chorus. but otherwise, an interesting
track.

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I gotta figure out a better drum theory. My songs lose a lot of power because
I tend to chose a beat and sitck with it instead of adding layers. Thanks for
the comment.

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