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work in progress.
this song shall be the background for a little movie (as a gift for friends) about a weekend in february, when we cycled along the river, which builds the borderline between poland and germany.
maybe anybody of you have any tipp or suggestion, what i could change or improve.
at the moment i´m not satisfied with the result. something is missing or maybe the whole tune is bad.... i´m not sure.

for the first time in my life i use a bottle-neck........

a sincere opinion, a loud criticism.....anything would be much appreciated.

tia and best from berlin
olaf.
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Uploaded: Apr 22, 2009 - 03:44:19 PM
Last Updated: Apr 23, 2009 - 12:15:10 AM Last Played: Oct 12, 2009 - 05:47:38 PM
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Feter said 214 days ago (April 22nd, 2009)
Bicycle Ride
very cool ....the feel of the electric guitar just so right
working incredible balance with the acoustics ...very moody
and flowing so well ...good job ...thnx alot for sharin !!!!
Vic Holman said 214 days ago (April 22nd, 2009)
progressing
actually i like what i hear. if anything, it seems to me that this should have vocals.

excellent job on the slide. usually that's something that takes a little work to get down
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MarkHolbrook said 214 days ago (April 22nd, 2009)
Agreed
I'm looking forward to the final!
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musicmarket said 212 days ago (April 25th, 2009)
THANK YOU
Feter, thank you Vic, thank you Mark.
if you like this song..... maybe i should it like too... as it is... more or less.
1st i´ll work on the drums. maybe it is a little to monotonous.
vocals... unfortunately i can´t do it, because there are some dialogs on the movie, what needs space..
i´ll give it a go.....

so: thank you for your warm words.
have a good weekend.
best from berlin
olaf
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Boundless said 205 days ago (May 1st, 2009)
As a soundtrack
sounds very good to me. I wouldn't fill it more
- it's more than enough
to support images.
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lavalamp said 190 days ago (May 16th, 2009)
Man this is so good
I don't know why I haven't heard from you until now. Great stuff.

Dave


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Parichayaka said 188 days ago (May 18th, 2009)
inspiring
The overall sound, mood combination of instruments and chord progression are very beautiful, harmonious and inspire reflection. Great as a soundtrack or as a soothing instrumental. You're obviously very talented and have a good ear and sense for arranging and mixing. No loud criticism here! This is solid, only at 2:11 you seem to loose focus for a few seconds, also try using the cello section to build intensity (currently you have strings throughout the song). But, like your other posts here, this is very enjoyable and has a high musical standard as is!
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