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Story of a First Kiss


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Cheesecube

 Genre: Acoustic
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This is just the rough draft, first draft of the song put all the way together. It's a slam poem to music. Let me know what you think.
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Lyrics
We were there
And the wind was blowing as I was running my fingers through your hair
Like a million thoughts running through my mind.
I fell behind.
Into a pit of perception
A new conception within your voice
And your kiss.
I was given a choice
Between right and wrong.

When I sang you that song
I made my decision.
It wasn't right, but it felt like it.
We sat in the dark with night vision
And you said you felt like you could pick up a rock
and throw it across town.

Distinctly I remember the sound
of your laughter
as it echoed through through the tone of your tears.
The anticipation of the morning after
Will burn in my gut years later

When the sight of steam billowing from your body
into the frost of the night air
Has left my conscious.
When the scent of your hair
Has stopped giving me that nauseous
tingling that you call butterflies.
When I say goodbye
To you
And us
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Plays: 51
Downloads: 68
Votes: 2
Uploaded: Apr 30, 2009 - 08:57:03 PM
Last Updated: Apr 30, 2009 - 08:57:03 PM Last Played: Oct 10, 2013 - 03:59:58 PM
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Comments
tenover said 2033 days ago (April 30th, 2009)
Very cool....
I like it. A lot. Good job, very different and refreshing.
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Feter said 2033 days ago (April 30th, 2009)
Story of a First Kiss
very powerful ...I felt this so much ...great reciting ...
and guitar picking ...I dont think there s much needed to be
done but recorded it with higher quality ..this take with your
vocal just amazing ...thnx alot for sharin !!!!
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VicDiesel said 2026 days ago (May 7th, 2009)
Unusual
Lyrics but not sung? Why not. It works. The ending is particularly striking.
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Char said 1344 days ago (March 21st, 2011)
Your voice
singing or speaking is very nice. This vocal needs to be a bit more prominent. I admit though that I missed your singing it. Thanks.
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