"I think these are some of the best words I have ever written" ...It would be nice to see them. Great artwork. I little repetitous on the drums and guitar sounds. But still a cool song.

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I have an aversion to printing the lyrics. I think they should be heard and not
read. But that's just me. —thanks for the kind words.

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the mix on the guitar at first is a bit weak but i know if
you recorded it in GB it would sound good. i like your
vocals - distinct voice.

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i like the lyrics and vocal delivery. the guitar sounds are
cool, although heavier than i normally like. but good
nonetheless. the drums sound a bit too cheesy. maybe
make them really, intentionally cheesy and you'd have
something most people would mistake from off Beck's
first two albums. (what happened to beck, by the way?)
rock on!

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Thanks! But it's all keyboard, no guitar. And Beck is still out there, Sea
Change from a year and a half ago is excellent.

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