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| Rasapriya said 159 days ago (June 15th, 2009) | |
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R&B What a beautiful and smooth voice. This has lots of potential. I think your mix needs a lit a little more balance. I thought the bass line could have been louder, making a nice bottom end contrast your smooth vocals. Overall, nice. Check out my latest song called Fall to Earth
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| davisamerica said 157 days ago (June 18th, 2009) | |
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very cool track welcome to MJ ... I really like this track. Great vocals. Like VW said .. builds and breaks work really well ... Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)
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| lengold said 154 days ago (June 20th, 2009) | |
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I'm really liking this too. Yes, welcome to Macjams. Cheers Len Check out my latest song called Dodgy Doughnut
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| Char said 152 days ago (June 22nd, 2009) | |
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Been there. Could you post the lyrics, please? Very nice. Thanks. Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)
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| dbaymon34 said 152 days ago (June 23rd, 2009) | |
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Lyrics Don't Leave (Ooooh Wee) I laid you down to watch you grow I gave u all of my heart and soul You didn't take it You threw it down And now my mind is spining round im going up I can't come down this gravity is flipping-flopping all around but If you know how im feeling somebody come and help me sing it out Ohhh (Oooh Wee) Baby Don't Do it, Don't Do it to me (Oooh Wee) Baby Don't Do it, Don'tWalk Out and Leave (Oooh Wee) Baby Don't Do it, Don't Do it to me (Oooh Wee) Baby Don't Do it, Don'tWalk Out and Leave I'm trying to move to a higher place don't wanna think of you or see your face I know, you are so lovely your eyes, so brown kinda hazely The way you walk is so sexy but I don't want to be incomplete but I guess I already am You walked out, You left me You left your man But If you know how I'm feeling If you know how I'm feeling if you know whats the deal and somebody come and help me sing it out Ohhhh I laid you down to watch you grow I gave u all of my heart and soul You didn't take it You threw it down And now my mind is spining round im going up I can't come down this gravity is flipping-flopping all around but If you know how im feeling somebody come and help me sing it out Ohhh (Oooh Wee) Baby Don't Do it, Don't Do it to me (Oooh Wee) Baby Don't Do it, Don'tWalk Out and Leave (Oooh Wee) Baby Don't Do it, Don't Do it to me (Oooh Wee) Baby Don't Do it, Don'tWalk Out and Leave Ooooh Wee Baby x2 Oooh Ahh baby x2 Just Leave Me x4 I can move on I am strong Six Months from Now Don't Come Crying Out (To Me Babe) --> Repeatly Six Months from Now Don't Come Crying Out Don't Come Weaping Out Don't Come Crying Out (To Me Babe) --> Repeatly I'm Moving on From you x4 Check out my latest song called How Fast Do You Wanna Go?
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| mvh9591 said 149 days ago (June 25th, 2009) | |
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Nice_______ I can relate. Nice mix. Thanks for sharing, mvh : ) Check out my latest song called Maggie Rodriguez tribute
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| drakonis said 148 days ago (June 26th, 2009) | |
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nice... very smooth song, and you do have a nice voice here. Good variations, although I'd probably like a teeny bit more changes in the drums over the main melody, but that's just me. Welcome to Macjams! ttfn, Drakonis Check out my latest song called Lullaby for the Inner Child
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| Lennon714 said 148 days ago (June 26th, 2009) | |
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solid tune. You tell the story well and the vocals sound nice. Welcome to MJ! Check out my latest song called Anarchy, Inc.
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| Dadai.2 said 148 days ago (June 27th, 2009) | |
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This is a wonderful song... a blend of classic R&B with your soulful vocal... shades of some Al Green styling here and there... with the more modern beat style. The instrumentation, the female vocal thing... are cool textures throughout. I was into the song from start to finish. That says a lot in my book. Kudos and welcome to MJ. Jack Check out my latest song called The Riverside (with Ed sloparts sitting in)
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| Jarvoid said 147 days ago (June 28th, 2009) | |
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Showing my age here ...last time I looked R'n'B was rhythmn and blues...obviously not so anymore.....whatever, this is cool tho' I like the telephone voice in the background and the whole thing has a good production value....welcome to this happy bunch of loonies....did you say you were going to major in Neuroscience,hmmm may come in handy with us lot........back to the rubber room for me ! ! Check out my latest song called Witches in Texas-'Hallowe'en Challenge 2009'
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| craft said 147 days ago (June 28th, 2009) | |
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cool r'n'b Man you got it!! Smooth r'n'b.. Welcome to macjams Check out my latest song called Blue Lights (feat. Spleenveil)
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| debmac said 146 days ago (June 28th, 2009) | |
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interesting arrangement... Welcome to MJ's and thanks for stopping' by with your song...may have missed it otherwise.. I am new to MJ's and critiquing as well, so just want to say I liked the variety of musical movement, vocals fit nicely and thanks for sharing your gift of music. Deb |
| Daugrin said 142 days ago (July 3rd, 2009) | |
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R&B Standard R&B groove thing is working out here, a complete arrangement, always something is stirring. The aspects of the tune are explored in several ways, shows a depth as an arrangement. Pitch challenge in the vocal line stood out. I am wondering if this was an intentional decision or a consequence of the recording environment. This works on a lot of levels as a commercial recording. Well done! You have found a home. Daug Check out my latest song called Daphne w/ Andy Wigzell
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| Moviz said 138 days ago (July 7th, 2009) | |
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Very good work with this number.... I like your smooth voice and you did an excellent job on the backing and lyrics; just great..... and I also welcome you to Macjams, regards M Check out my latest song called A Soldiers Dream (Remix/record)
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| mowguy3 said 137 days ago (July 7th, 2009) | |
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Pop,R&B Whatever Genre you want to call it,it's good stuff. A little late but welcome to MJ's. I will be on the look out for more. Check out my latest song called A Different Shade Of Moonlight
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| Elevator_Funk said 137 days ago (July 8th, 2009) | |
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relaxed... sounds like Dwele without the Rhodes. Good stuff. You could afford to be more heavy-handed with the production next time thru especially with the bass and drums and try doubleing your vocal track to give your voice more presence. nice first post to mjs Check out my latest song called Post Nasal Drip
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| dbaymon34 said 128 days ago (July 16th, 2009) | |
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Thanks I just want to say thanks for all the comments to my song... Check out my latest song called How Fast Do You Wanna Go?
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| TonyAzemia said 109 days ago (August 4th, 2009) | |
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Your Welcome your welcome , your music is beautiful, man keep it up Check out my latest song called Pick Up Ur Fone!
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| Vinylhack said 128 days ago (July 16th, 2009) | |
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Nice... its one thing to programme well composed music but to write and add lyrics is a whole different ball game. I like this, but i agree with Rasapriya; bass could have been 'fuller' to fatten out the bottom end. Check out my latest song called Origins of Sin
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| TonyAzemia said 126 days ago (July 19th, 2009) | |
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beautiful your music is better than neyo or kanye wst, love your music keep it up man , love the drum beat and vocals :) Check out my latest song called Pick Up Ur Fone!
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| egobandit said 113 days ago (July 31st, 2009) | |
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Smooth Cool positioning of sounds, like the layering. Has a good catchy melody. I enjoyed this thanks for sharing Check out my latest song called when its love
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SmokeyVW
i like this
the build ups and breakdowns really work!
thanks
and Welcome to MacJams