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Less Than Invincible


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Calchas

 Genre: Acoustic

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This song is dedicated to the memory of Glen Audibert, who died when we were both only 19.

I had met Glen a year and a half before. The connection was instantaneous, and borderline clairvoyant.

We hitch-hiked from Phoenix, Arizona to California and spent the summer of 70 there. We had an exceptionally amazing time at a very special place in Big Sur. We thumbed back to Phoenix after that.

A few months later we went to Boulder, Colorado with some friends, and had many illegal(!) adventures. After that we visited my mother in Colorado Springs. We bought a beat-up old Chevy while we were there.

It was winter and a huge winter-storm hit Colorado. Oblivious to the danger, Glen and I drove south in a blizzard, on four VERY bald tires. It was so weird because all the way from the Springs to Flagstaff, Arizona we kept seeing wrecked cars, trucks, four-wheel drives, and vehicles with chains on the tires strewn along the roadside and in ditches, but we never had a problem!

Once back in Phoenix, we decided to deal drugs, and traded our old Chevy to some speed freaks for $200 of crystal meth. But, geniuses that we were, we shot up all of the speed over the ensuing week. Then, burned out and broke, we decided that Glenn would return to Connecticut for awhile and I would go back to Colorado. We had one last big bash with friends, said our goodbyes and returned to our respective homes.

After several months of recuperating, Glen contacted me and invited me to fly out and stay with him. He had many friends there and all were anxious to meet the mad Mr. Wark. I was almost engaged to be married by then, and asked him to give me a couple days to think about it.

The tie between us was so strong that I couldn’t resist. So the next night I took my girlfriend out for dinner, and told her I was going to be leaving for awhile. Although she took it rather hard, it went rather well and we stayed and enjoyed our meal. Suddenly---about 8:00 PM---I began to shake and cry uncontrollably, and could not figure out why. Finally, it passed. After I got home I called Glen up to give him my decision. His father answered the phone, and told me that Glen had been killed in an auto accident around 8:00 PM...

There’s plenty more, but it can’t be told here.

Anyway, we were young and very foolish, but except for my wife Diana, I’ve never had a closer friend. I still miss him terribly.

Hope you can enjoy this little slice of my hippie past.

PLEASE NOTE! There are several glitches with the guitars and one with the doubled vox at the end. I have corrected these on the master. If anyone would like to have a copy of the corrected MP3, just send me a private note and I'll send one.

Be well all!
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Lyrics
LESS THAN INVINCIBLE

I.
He hitch-hiked from Connecticut,
with two of his friends;
in search of adventure,
like many young men.

I met him down in Phoenix,
at a love-in event;
and I knew right away,
we’d soon be best of friends.

II.
His buddies they pressed on,
but Glen, he chose to stay.
He was all that I had,
since my folks had moved away.

Closer than brothers.
We faced the unknown,
and left everything we knew,
for that long and dusty road.

1st Chorus:
T’was the summer of 1970.
We were young, and we were free.
And the road stretched out before us,
as far as we could see.
So we smoked us a joint,
and we drank us some wine.
We were less than invincible,
but doin’ just fine!

Yeah...

III.
We thumbed our way westward,
out to the Pacific coast.
Hitched up and down the highway,
but never did feel lost.

We slept on the beaches;
and pan-handled for change.
We partied with friends,
but never knew their names.

IV.
Well the wine, it flowed so freely,
on those acid-spiked nights.
We were fearless
in all we said and did.

The Aurora Borealis
was never so pretty,
as the lights
that were dancing,
...dancing in our heads.

2nd Chorus:
It was the summer of 1970.
We were young, and we were free.
And the road stretched out before us,
as far as we could see.
So we smoked us a joint,
and we drank us some wine.
We were less than invincible,
but feelin’ alright!

Hey hey...

V.
We did Big Sur together;
caught a glimpse of Paradise.
Thumbed up to Colorado.
Looked around, and bought a ride.

Drove southward in a blizzard,
on four slick balding tires.
Seemed nothing could ever harm us,
though we were right down to the wire.

VI.
In Phoenix once again,
we concocted us a plan.
We would sell crystal meth;
“make all the money that we can.”

We traded our old car,
for two-hundred bucks of dope;
but our plan went straight to hell,
when we shot all of it up!

Ugh!

3rd Chorus:
It was the early 1970’s.
We were young, and we were free.
And the road stretched out before us,
as far as we could see.
So we smoked us a joint,
and we drank us some wine.
We were less than invincible,
...feeling empty inside.

Oooh...la la la la.
Oooh...la la la la.
Oooh...la la la la la...

Hey hey...

VII.
Burned out and road weary,
we needed us a break.
Glen returned home to
visit family and friends.

I thumbed back to Colorado,
to see my mother once again;
and to plot
our next great adventure.

VIII.
I called him up one evening.
I’d decided I would fly,
out there to Connecticut,
and stay with him awhile.

His dad answered the phone,
and told me Glenn had just died...
I was less than invincible,
so I broke down and cried.

4th Chorus:
We were two kindred spirits.
We were young, and we were free;
and the road it seemed so endless,
for Glen and for me.
We were brothers in arms,
and partners in crime.
We were less than invincible,
and we’d run out of time.

5th Chorus:
It’s true what they said.
People thought us both quite mad.
But he was the very best friend,
that I had ever had.
And I loved him like a brother,
till that fateful day.
When, less than invincible,
---he faded away.

Hey hey...
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Comments
Char said 158 days ago (June 20th, 2009)
Micheal..
All of life is a miracle. This is a brilliant tribute to life. Thanks.

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Char said 158 days ago (June 20th, 2009)
Amazing.
A lot of love in this. Deserved two comments. Only good thing about belief in afterlife is the idea that you can see those you love again and be with them forever. I hope those we didn't care for go someplace else. :)
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Calchas said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
Thank you Char!
I appreciate the nice comments, as well as your incredibly generous pimpage on this tune.

Glad you enjoyed my friend!

Be well!
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Feter said 158 days ago (June 20th, 2009)
LESS THAN INVINCIBLE
I think this is YOUR classic ...your vocal so true ...so honest to the song
and style which I think you REALLY need to explore more and more ...folky rootsy
guy you are my friend ... very interesting story and yes like is that crazy ..
thnx alot for sharin such gem !!!!
Calchas said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
Hi Feter!
Thanks so much for the props!

You know, I was gonna do this one up with guitar, bass, drums, keys, and perhaps some violin; but changed my mind at the last minute. The song is so damn personal and I feel that this stripped down approach is much more intimate.

Although I am---and will always be---primarily a ROCKER, I have strong folk roots. I do like to explore them from time to time when the right vehicle comes along.

Glad you dug it bro!

Be well!
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MarkHolbrook said 158 days ago (June 20th, 2009)
Heartfelt
MW... Cool you wrote and recorded a song about a buddy!
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Calchas said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
Hi Mark!
Yeah...a flash-in-the-pan friendship that was incredibly intense. I still miss Glen. He would dig this tune! Glad you enjoyed it.

Be well!
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sloparts said 158 days ago (June 20th, 2009)
That's quite a story Micheal !
One that has been lived before and will be again I'm afraid. I had a friend like that in 1965, but unlike your friend, we both went our separate ways after the summer and I've never found out what happened to my friend Frank.

But for the one glorious summer we did it all, and did it well and proper. Alas while I wonder from time to time about Frank, I fear I'll never know what became of my friend.

Great song Micheal, now you need to go back into the studio and flesh out the rest of the song, the Bass and Drums, some keys maybe and a few righteous lead parts to do this wonderful story justice.

Excellent song writing my friend and your vocal was full and powerful.

Ed
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Calchas said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
Thanks Ed...
It's the abbreviated, PG-13 version of the story, but all true.

RE Frank. Who knows? Perhaps he got straightened out and is alive and well somewhere?

Thanks for listening and commenting my friend!

Be well!
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HolleyHall said 158 days ago (June 20th, 2009)
Ahh reminising the 70's!
Those were the good old days. Awesome folk tune!!
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Calchas said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
Thanks Holly!
They were good AND they were bad old days...like ALL days I guess.

Glad you liked the tune friend!

Be well!
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peacepiano said 158 days ago (June 20th, 2009)
Ballad
Very heartfelt ballad. I listened several times already. Strong stuff.

Take Care
Bill
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Calchas said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
Thank you Bill!
Several times? Yikes! (But of course, that's the kind of comment we all hope to get, isn't it?)

Glad you dug it bro!

Be well!
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Bob6stringer said 158 days ago (June 20th, 2009)
Reckless youth, duly chronicled
Been there and, well, kinda done that, for the most part. But you got something out of it I likely didn't. The "been to" part includes Big Sur, Boulder and Flagstaff (all in my later, sober years). But of course this isn't about the geography, vs. those crazy, can-ever-repeat (under penalty of death) experiences of reckless youth. I can't tell you how much I relate to your story. If I tried I might not be able to remember it. But this song is a hell of an accomplishment, in the final product and the process you had to go through to bring it. It works well just as it is, stripped down yet about to overflow with energy.
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Calchas said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
Thanks Bob!
Always great to have you on board. When I was considering doing this as a full-band tune (very briefly) I actually considered asking you to play lead guitar! (Not this one then...but perhaps sometime soon?)

Anyway, I suppose a number of former hippies and n'er-do-wells here will be able to relate to this one.

Glad you liked it!

Be well friend!


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magnatone said 158 days ago (June 20th, 2009)
Less Than Invincible
Amazing story Micheal, wonderful tribute, very excellent music. Really loving your lyrics, and how it all comes together in the music. Great work as always - congrats on this!
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Calchas said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
Karen!
Thanks for giving this a spin my friend. Hopefully it stirs good memories...

Be well!
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guitapick said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
You and I...
...have hitched and driven the same highways...

Seems like it was 2 weeks ago, sometimes...

"...less than invincible..."

Great tribute. I'll raise a glass, tonight, Micheal.
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Calchas said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
We were lucky...
...nay blessed, to have survived those days Bob. So many did not.

Thanks for listening AND for raising the glass!

Be well friend!
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davisamerica said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
musically a surprise
altho the song touches many of us brave blind soldiers of the 70s. Very nice tribute to your friend. Mr. Wark ... peace to you.
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Calchas said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
"brave blind"
YUP. That about sums it up Jack...

We seem to see things much more clearly in retrospect. Life's funny that way.

Thanks for listening bro!

Be well!
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Roxylee said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
It's a miracle
that we children of the 60's are still here to reminisce about the purple haze days. I love your vocals in this, Mike. Up front and clear, emotion filled and strong.
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Calchas said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
Hi Roxy!
"The purple haze days"! Oh well...Live and LEARN right? We did, thankfully.

Thanks for the props dear friend!

Be well!
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shavingronaldscar said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
WOOT!
Tear up that folk riddim! :D

This is kickin', man! Great style, way to spin a tale.
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Calchas said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
Always nice...
...to get a WOOT on one of my tunes! lol

Many thanks Jo.

Be well friend!
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Outtaorbit said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
Man o Man
I remember....nicely done
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Calchas said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
Hi Patrick!
Those were, indeed, "strange days," as Mr. Morrison told us.

Glad you were one of the survivors bro!

Be well!
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Rocha Malhada said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
Nice tribute to Glen
some things and people are irreplaceable. It must be a vast hole you feel in your heart.

. - Harold
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Calchas said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
Harold!
Nice to hear from you bro! "Hole"? More like a crater...but we learn to make our peace with these things.

Thanks for listening and commenting man.

Be well!

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lavalamp said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
Story teller
They had crystal meth back then? Thanks God I never touched that crap.

Sorry about what happened to your best friend. Some strange things (The shaking part before he past.) You two sure had a true connection.

Loved your folksy, story telling approach here. Very good guitar and very nicely recorded.

It's good that people like you keep people like your old friend alive in song.

Great job brother.

Dave
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Calchas said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
Lavabro!
RE crystal meth: Yup. They had it back then. But they just called it "crystal." It it was and still is "crap." You were wise to stay away from it!

It's only part of the sub-plot here. When we're young we believe ourselves to be more invincible than we actually are...and the consequences can be deadly. So in this tune I am remembering the brother-love we shared for just under two years, while simultaneously bemoaning some of the context in which it occurred.

Thanks for the props bro!

Be well!
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Doadars Uncle said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
Wow man
Great slice of life! Open road feel. Wonderfully told story. You're lucky to have had those years with Glenn. My heart goes out to you.
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Calchas said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
Howdy Doug!
Stretching my acoustic wings a bit these days. Glad folks are enjoying this side of me.

Thanks for listening and commenting bro!

Be well!
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Vic Holman said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
story tellin'
great way to put the bio out there, Mike.

great story of the times and sometimes invincible and sometimes not, youth. When you get older you start to wunder how in the heck did I get through those years.
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Calchas said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
Glad to finally get this...
...off my chest bro. The twists and turns of life, and the loves and friendships we fall in and out of, are truly tres bizarre when seen in retrospect. Years ago I wrote a song for Glen. But I'll never record it. Much too personal. Besides, I could barely get through this one. I kept choking!

Anyway, glad you enjoyed it my friend.

Be well!
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Diviner said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
Brilliantly Lovely
What a great experience that has produced a great song. This is powerful and like all great songs sung from the heart. I am truely moved. Fantastic track, brilliant tribute.
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Calchas said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
Thank you Keith!
This is a live-and-learn bio piece. Personal, yes...but I think there's stuff in it lot's of folks can relate to at one level or another. For me, doing this song after all these years is a bit of a catharsis.

Glad you dug it friend. I appreciate the kind review.

Be well!
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abfkingsport said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
ABFkingsport
I have always said Life is adventure full of wonderful experiences and this is a great one. Takes me back to my teens.

Great mix. Nice and clean sound.

Enjoyed it my friend,
The King
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Calchas said 156 days ago (June 22nd, 2009)
Thank you Anthony...
Glad to take you back for awhile friend. I appreciate the kind review.

Be well!
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Bob Rodgers said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
An
excellant song Michael and some great lyrics that tell an amazing story.
A great tribute to your friend and some really fine vocals from you, very much enjoyed.

Bob
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Calchas said 156 days ago (June 22nd, 2009)
Hey Bob!
Thanks for the nice comment. I'm pretty proud of this one, in spite of several fairly obvious problems with the mix. (I've corrected them all in the master but HATE re-posting!)

Glad you enjoyed it!

Be well friend!
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Richard_Schletty said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
Connection
A touching Folk-Rock tale. A blend of Simon & Garfunkel, Gordon Lightfoot, Harry Chapin and Johnny Cash imitating Micheal Wark. I like that refrain! Nice job on the harmonies. I'd like to hear more chord variation, especially with the refrain. Gets repetitive, like Wreck of the EF or Ballad of Casey Deiss. I'd also like to hear a marked slowdown in VIII that would convey the tragedy of that moment. It would help to break the incessant beat. I was criticized in the same way for my song "Stack Come Down" which people appreciate more as an introspective reverie than an extroverted political rant. In that song I use a driving Bluegrass chord pattern. It made me realize that the instrumental underlayment must match the lyrics.
Calchas said 156 days ago (June 22nd, 2009)
Bro Rich!
I've sent you a private note re the tech aspects of this tune.

Thanks for listening and commenting. Always nice to hear from you.

Be well!
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sheilad said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
the story
the delivery, the strength to speak the words of truth about the crazy things done in the past all make up an exceptional piece of art. Thank you for sharing this story. Life is too short to not enjoy every day to its fullest and love the ones we are fortunate enough to have. My favorite or your work so far so straight to d/l... Thanks
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Calchas said 156 days ago (June 22nd, 2009)
Hi Sheilad!
Glad you enjoyed this one my friend. I posted it too soon though, and there are several glaring mistakes which you'll notice in time. Sorry...If you want, I could send you the corrected version.

Be well dear friend!
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bronco said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
Quite a Tale
Good trip back Michael. Glad you came through those times. The good thing about the young is if they are lucky they will survive and learn to grow up. Of course I have no tales such as this to relate, at least I want my son to believe that.
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Calchas said 156 days ago (June 22nd, 2009)
My old friend Tom Bronco!
Always great to hear from you sir! Yeah...growing up comes harder to some, doesn't it?

RE your son: I have three and they each went pretty wild for a spell. But they survived, thank goodness. (And none of them were as nuts as their old man was when he was their age. Ha ha...) Some day you will have to fess-up though...

Anyway, glad you enjoyed this one.

Be well!
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Dadai.2 said 157 days ago (June 21st, 2009)
A very cool throw-back song...

high fives for this classic tune... Great energy in the guitar and vocals. Simplicity rules here, in the story telling, the music, and singing.

Oh those days gone by... things that draw our memories, the good, the bad, and the ugly. This has the appropriate rose colored glasses look. Well done Warky.

D
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Calchas said 156 days ago (June 22nd, 2009)
Hello Jack!
YAY! You really GET what I tried to do here musically! Apart from several glitches (which I have corrected on the master) I wouldn't change a thing here.

I did try to tell the truth here. There was no need to embellish, or draw out a moral. It's all there in what really happened. He was foolish and died. I was foolish and survived. There is a great mystery in such matters. I let the mystery stand...

Thanks for listening and commenting dear friend!

Be well!
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PaddyNavinCaryatid said 156 days ago (June 22nd, 2009)
Hell of a story...
... hell of a song too. Nice work Michael, top tune. thanks for sharing your memories with us.
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Calchas said 156 days ago (June 22nd, 2009)
Thank you Paddy!
Glad you could dig this old school approach to folk music bro. happy to share a part of my story with you!

Be well friend!
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kassia said 156 days ago (June 22nd, 2009)
beautiful tribute
to what sounds like an incredible friendship. thank you for the song and the story. in the best of the folk tradition, a story told in song to be remembered for all time.
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dave_b said 156 days ago (June 22nd, 2009)
Great story, good hook
Liked the way you took "less then invincible" and put it into a new context with each chorus. I was there back in the 70's and your song brought it back to me. A well-crafted song.
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lengold said 155 days ago (June 23rd, 2009)
Thanks for
sharing the background info which brings this song into sharp focus.
Quite an epic, great playing and singing.
Cheers
Len

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Relic67 said 154 days ago (June 24th, 2009)
wow
powerful tribute to your friend. an amazing tale, sorry about the tragic end to his life.
I really like the approach you took with the guitar accompaniment.
sounds like you've lived enough to never run out of song material...
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blaky smith said 154 days ago (June 24th, 2009)
Heartfelt
Great song Micheal and nice tribute. It was worth the trouble to make a little of work of translation to be sure to understand totally the story. I imagine what you can feel through this personal song. Sorry about what happened to your friend...
Thank you Mike ...

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TobinMueller said 153 days ago (June 25th, 2009)
More than a story
Wo. Thanks for sharing this true and honest and moving story. All those years, still so present. I know what you mean. Kind of speechless, what with all the memories this invokes. Again, thanks for sharing this marvelous memory/tribute.
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bud said 152 days ago (June 26th, 2009)
Quite a story Mike - my condolences -
yes - after all these years. I lost a young friend too soon and the pain is fresh today. As for the traveling party - this reminds me of some of the adventures I shared with my brother. We truly thought we were invincible and at times invisible. Quite often we should have landed hard but didn't. Well done tune Mike - and well told tale.
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egobandit said 152 days ago (June 26th, 2009)
sounds like
a great time to be alive! Very cool to remember right along with you! Excellent!
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Jarvoid said 151 days ago (June 27th, 2009)
Heartfelt
without being maudlin, sort of evokes the 'better to burn bright than fade away'
sentiment ,but if all of us old faders weren't around who would sing about the bright burners?...hmmm that's too profound for me ! Gre4at song ,I like ths simplicity of the guitar and voice...did you say that you have upgraded it or something?
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alley-oop said 151 days ago (June 27th, 2009)
storyteller
cool track...has a Dylan-like quality.
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mowguy3 said 151 days ago (June 27th, 2009)
Great story
and this song relays your relationship and history with a close friend in spades. As I get older I wonder who's next? Anyhow, super track in every way. I realy like the acoustic story tellin and you do it well. Thanks.
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Andy-bm said 151 days ago (June 27th, 2009)
Cool song!
I had a preview of this when you were considering it for drum tracks. I'm glad that you changed your mind. It has a more intimate feel this way, and a full band couldn't add anything to that.

I hope your friend can hear it.

//Andy
five_extra_arms said 149 days ago (June 29th, 2009)
We All Need More Friends Like You
Not only is this a heartfelt tribute, but it's as if it were written back in the summer of 1970. Time didn't effect the power of the story of your friendship.

I really enjoyed this stripped down sound - fast strumming guitar and your great vocals.

One of your best songs to date.


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drakonis said 142 days ago (July 6th, 2009)
A sweet tribute
a rather personal peek into your life, I almost felt voyeuristic listening to this... beautiful and appropriately fast guitar work through this (living life fast), and real heart-felt singing and lyrics. Glad you've pulled through those adventures and are offering us your music now. My thoughts to Glen.
ttfn,
Drakonis
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Moviz said 122 days ago (July 26th, 2009)
From the heart
From the heart Michael and it shows.... and apart from all the feeling here, it's a very interesting story... boy you lived life to the full it seems. Best work always comes from what we know and have experienced. Love your performance in this mode....... and the double vox sounds great where it was added. Great pace too, but I'll bet your arm was aching when you came to the end LOL, regards M
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Trillian said 97 days ago (August 20th, 2009)
A very poignant ballad and tribute for your best friend.
The music reminded me a little of a group in the Celtic genre JD likes to listen to called The Pogues. But it had a little feel of the Goodwillys song about the ill fated cattle drive.... and reminded me also of several of Jack Kerouac's novels. : ) Your narration had the former younger reckless side of my 'bullet proof' teenage personality (which I don't let out of the house any more) riveted to the end. : ) If I may say so - Boy, you sure have led a cats life!!! ( 9 lives ) It is hard to lose ones we have loved, and were blessed to know - nice that they live on in the memories of our hearts. : )
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Name: Micheal Wark/Karmic Whale
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Sabbatical shamatical! I’m finding that this hit-and-run approach is working well for me. ... [see more]

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