On a Day Like This

cloudfactory

Genre: Indie Rock

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This is merely a rough draft demo...changes to come soon. Let me know what you think, I need input. Thanks!

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Lyrics

Is anyone sad in the world I wonder, does anyone ever weep on a day like this, with the sun up above and the green earth under. "Why, what is life but a dream of bliss?"... someone said to me in the street this morning as I opened my window to let the light in of the dark that was dawning.

And you threw it all away, and you threw it all away, nothing is left to say, and you threw it all away.

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Hits: 288
Comments: 10
Fans: 5
Plays: 49
Downloads: 0
Votes: 0
Uploaded: Jul 17, 2009 - 08:55:25 AM
Last Updated: Oct 28, 2009 - 11:55:29 AM Last Played: Oct 28, 2009 - 12:11:11 PM

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Creative Commons License:
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And you threw it all away (1), Cloud Factory (5), Brenton Little (5)

Comments

Godchaser	Godchaser said 127 days ago (July 17th, 2009)
	I like it Like the tempo the lyrics the sound sources the vibe thus far.One man's rough draft is many a man's final version.perhaps a slow build after the cutoff point of the demo to complete.Good stuff! Blessings Check out my latest song called As i Walk

davisamerica	davisamerica said 127 days ago (July 17th, 2009)
	daniel said it best ... some guys rough is another guy's goal. really nice work Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

Lennon714	Lennon714 said 127 days ago (July 17th, 2009)
	Very, very cool You've got loads of talent, Brenton. The ghost story ending is brilliant, as are the guitar sounds. There are people on MJ that don't like dirty vocals, I'm not one of them. Get filthy. This tracks shines. Great job! Check out my latest song called Anarchy, Inc.

cloudfactory	cloudfactory said 127 days ago (July 17th, 2009)
	to Lennon Hey thank you very much. The ghost ending was an accident..but I liked it. And the dirty vox...I just like the trashy sound sometimes. Thanks, have a good day! Check out my latest song called Up in Your Arms

I.G.M.

I.G.M. said 127 days ago (July 17th, 2009)

First of all
I want to let you know that I really like it!!
Some suggestions: use more breaks, more pauses, parts in which the listener can relax a little.
Watch out for unnecessary length and kill it!! :o)
Verse melody is strong and well intoned, melody in the "chorus" is too slack, as if you`re bored or something.
Just my personal opinion.
Congrats on a good one.

Check out my latest song called I`m Gone

cloudfactory	cloudfactory said 127 days ago (July 17th, 2009)
	I.G.M. Thanks for the input. I will def consider some of these qualities when going to finalize. Thanks! Check out my latest song called Up in Your Arms

shavingronaldscar	shavingronaldscar said 24 days ago (October 28th, 2009)
	word! Great track, sounding really tight. Check out my latest song called Way Down FIlth

cloudfactory	cloudfactory said 24 days ago (October 28th, 2009)
	thanks Thanks Shavingronald I'll check out your tunes! peace and blessings, Check out my latest song called Up in Your Arms

cloudfactory	cloudfactory said 24 days ago (October 28th, 2009)
	thanks Thanks Shavingronald I'll check out your tunes! peace and blessings, Check out my latest song called Up in Your Arms

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Artist Info

Name: Brenton Little

This is my solo music....no i didn't quit any band, just have to let out my own personal creativity somewhere. Creating music without limits, without opinions, described as "Floaty" by Christian Baxter. "Completely original" - Seth Flood. "Magnum...j... [see more]

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