Home Music Articles Forums Blog Chat More...      

One Last Time


by

obbster

 Genre: Rock

Get Flash to see this player.

Description
A song written and recorded today. Still needs some work, but pretty pleased with how it came out.
Leave a Comment
You must be registered and logged-in to comment.
Lyrics
I watched you walk away
I miss you more each day

you didn't look back, you didn’t wanna see
I don’t wanna see.
Anymore..

Each day I lose you more
each day i know you less
can’t understand, I can’t explain

We said goodbye but
it never goes away
my body is an empty shell
i live in hell...

Chrous:
i wanna hold you close
i wanna draw you in
i wanna touch your skin
one last time

i wanna feel your breath
i wanna taste your lips
i wanna move in you
one last night

My thoughts are chasing me
im backed into a corner
i just want to escape
but your playing me

we said goodbye
love never goes away
im locked in my own cell
And you got the key

[Chorus]
Song Stats
Hits: 2106
Comments: 12
Fans: 7
Plays: 226
Downloads: 81
Votes: 2
Uploaded: Jul 31, 2009 - 11:55:27 AM
Last Updated: Jul 31, 2009 - 12:08:40 PM Last Played: Sep 20, 2017 - 12:58:10 PM
Song License
Creative Commons License:
Attribution-NoDerivs-NonCommercial

Creative Commons

Song Actions
share on facebook share on twitter download song
Hardware:
MacBook Pro
Software:
Logic Pro 9
Comments
crissew said 3035 days ago (July 31st, 2009)
Love your voice
Very disctinctive vibratto. Beautifully done harmonies.
Check out my latest song called Dollar Store Christmas w/ Jerry Rissew
crissew said 3035 days ago (July 31st, 2009)
BTW, faved and downloaded
at the end, maybe turn down the high hat a tad?
Check out my latest song called Dollar Store Christmas w/ Jerry Rissew
said 3035 days ago (July 31st, 2009)
pretty quick, eh?
Admirable accomplishment on short order - I could never do this thing on a longer time frame, kudos.

. - Harold
sheilad said 3035 days ago (July 31st, 2009)
you should be
pleased... this is a great piece....nice vocals! faved & d/l!
Check out my latest song called Nana Lives
sloparts said 3035 days ago (July 31st, 2009)
Great song writing Liam
and a hell of a production on this. Vocal sound just right in the mix with excellent harmonies and your use of overdrive guitar adds to it without covering everything else up. I like that!

One small nit, and this is a personal preference thing. I would have liked to have heard a proper ending on this instead of the fade out. But that's just me. What you did on the ending works well and is a very smoothly done fade, pro sounding to be sure.

Nice song, I like it a lot.

Ed


Check out my latest song called Quack's Blues
Feter said 3035 days ago (July 31st, 2009)
One Last Time
Very lovely tune ...cool guitar structure ...
sounds bit pro rock ...it shows how much you
worked on this ...I enjoyed this so ...thnx alot
for sharin !!!!
Check out my latest song called Roll with it
MarkHolbrook said 3035 days ago (July 31st, 2009)
Excellent vocals...
Is the plucked guitar midi or real? It sorta sounds midi... very well done tho... I love the structure of this piece.

Really a cool tune in general. Nicely done!
Check out my latest song called Corn Whiskey
Henke said 3035 days ago (July 31st, 2009)
Well done
in short time! Agree with crissew on the high hat, but a great song at large. Take care.

/Henke
Check out my latest song called Summer (Promenade) (WIP)
bobnisbet said 3035 days ago (July 31st, 2009)
Powerful
Unfortunately it makes me think of my former wife who I'd really rather not think of in this way!
maxruehl said 2942 days ago (November 1st, 2009)
Hey
this is terrific.:) Crissew told me about your music and I'm really impressed. Thanks for sharing it.:)
Check out my latest song called Shaolin Munk Funk (w/ musichead & awigze)
I.G.M. said 2942 days ago (November 1st, 2009)
cool tune
playback could be a bit more varying,
vocal line could be a bit less legato in my ears...
overall a fine, well sung piece!!
Check out my latest song called Reflexions
michaelkoppenheffer said 2906 days ago (December 7th, 2009)
Power Ballad
Crissew turned me onto this track--thx Charles: very nice arrangement and great vocals!
Check out my latest song called Till the Tap Runs Dry (album version)
Artist Info
artist photo
Name: Liam
Location: Glasgow Scotland
send a note
33 years old.... [see more]

Check out some of my other songs:

Chat
Who's Online
Invisible Members: 0
Visitors: 113