One Last Time

obbster

Genre: Rock

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Description

A song written and recorded today. Still needs some work, but pretty pleased with how it came out.

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Lyrics

I watched you walk away
I miss you more each day

you didn't look back, you didn’t wanna see
I don’t wanna see.
Anymore..

Each day I lose you more
each day i know you less
can’t understand, I can’t explain

We said goodbye but
it never goes away
my body is an empty shell
i live in hell...

Chrous:
i wanna hold you close
i wanna draw you in
i wanna touch your skin
one last time

i wanna feel your breath
i wanna taste your lips
i wanna move in you
one last night

My thoughts are chasing me
im backed into a corner
i just want to escape
but your playing me

we said goodbye
love never goes away
im locked in my own cell
And you got the key

[Chorus]

Song Stats

Hits: 377
Comments: 11
Fans: 9
Plays: 46
Downloads: 16
Votes: 2
Uploaded: Jul 31, 2009 - 11:55:27 AM
Last Updated: Jul 31, 2009 - 12:08:40 PM Last Played: Nov 19, 2009 - 09:41:28 PM

Song License

Creative Commons License:
Attribution-NoDerivs-NonCommercial

Song Actions

Keywords:

rock (1437), power ballad (4), post-grunge (1)

Hardware:

MacBook Pro

Software:

Logic Pro 9

Comments

crissew	crissew said 113 days ago (July 31st, 2009)
	Love your voice Very disctinctive vibratto. Beautifully done harmonies. Check out my latest song called What Does Love Entail w Relic67, ciheins & Filmscorz

crissew	crissew said 113 days ago (July 31st, 2009)
	BTW, faved and downloaded at the end, maybe turn down the high hat a tad? Check out my latest song called What Does Love Entail w Relic67, ciheins & Filmscorz

Rocha Malhada	Rocha Malhada said 113 days ago (July 31st, 2009)
	pretty quick, eh? Admirable accomplishment on short order - I could never do this thing on a longer time frame, kudos. . - Harold Check out my latest song called Kanun Oud Rock (LIOLI9)

sheilad	sheilad said 113 days ago (July 31st, 2009)
	you should be pleased... this is a great piece....nice vocals! faved & d/l! Check out my latest song called Halloween Wandering/PickQuickRecords

sloparts

sloparts said 113 days ago (July 31st, 2009)

Great song writing Liam
and a hell of a production on this. Vocal sound just right in the mix with excellent harmonies and your use of overdrive guitar adds to it without covering everything else up. I like that!

One small nit, and this is a personal preference thing. I would have liked to have heard a proper ending on this instead of the fade out. But that's just me. What you did on the ending works well and is a very smoothly done fade, pro sounding to be sure.

Nice song, I like it a lot.

Ed

Check out my latest song called Just a little Something

Feter	Feter said 113 days ago (July 31st, 2009)
	One Last Time Very lovely tune ...cool guitar structure ... sounds bit pro rock ...it shows how much you worked on this ...I enjoyed this so ...thnx alot for sharin !!!! Check out my latest song called A Night With Feter feat'(Roxylee sloparts crissew johnwhitehead and Yamin AL Yamani )

MarkHolbrook	MarkHolbrook said 113 days ago (July 31st, 2009)
	Excellent vocals... Is the plucked guitar midi or real? It sorta sounds midi... very well done tho... I love the structure of this piece. Really a cool tune in general. Nicely done! Check out my latest song called Never Say Goodbye - Bond Challenge

Henke	Henke said 113 days ago (July 31st, 2009)
	Well done in short time! Agree with crissew on the high hat, but a great song at large. Take care. /Henke Check out my latest song called Heading for Alpha Centauri (mj space race 2009)

bobnisbet	bobnisbet said 113 days ago (July 31st, 2009)
	Powerful Unfortunately it makes me think of my former wife who I'd really rather not think of in this way!

maxruehl	maxruehl said 20 days ago (November 1st, 2009)
	Hey this is terrific.:) Crissew told me about your music and I'm really impressed. Thanks for sharing it.:) Check out my latest song called Shaolin Munk Funk (w/ musichead & awigze)

I.G.M.	I.G.M. said 20 days ago (November 1st, 2009)
	cool tune playback could be a bit more varying, vocal line could be a bit less legato in my ears... overall a fine, well sung piece!! Check out my latest song called I`m Gone