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Changed the second half considerably but I not sure I'm happy with it. Comments welcome. Thanks for listening.
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| Feter said 109 days ago (August 5th, 2009) | |
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Indian Ocean Cool world music ...very nice spacey sound under the vocal sample ...a progressive Alan parson project kinda work ...thnx alot for sharin !!!! Check out my latest song called A Night With Feter feat'(Roxylee sloparts crissew johnwhitehead and Yamin AL Yamani )
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| MarkHolbrook said 109 days ago (August 5th, 2009) | |
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Wow On the initial vocals I'd back them up in the mix and slowly bring them more forward... It would peak your interest I think... Maybe on the first few some extra reverb to sound real far out... As it got on towards about 1:20 the vocal was a little too forefront... It was better at 1:38. Ok in general this is so damn cool it is unbelievable... I would just tweak the vocal levels to keep it interesting... She seems to get loud in places... Try to keep her a little more even but add points of accent... This is pretty amazing my friend!!! I can't wait to hear the finished product... The sound bed is amazing cool! Excellent work! Check out my latest song called Never Say Goodbye - Bond Challenge
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| MarkHolbrook said 109 days ago (August 5th, 2009) | |
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D a r n... I have the worst case of typoid fever this morning... what I mean is lower the volume on the initial vocals, more reverb then bring them more forward slowly... hope that is clear! Check out my latest song called Never Say Goodbye - Bond Challenge
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| WharmtonRise said 109 days ago (August 5th, 2009) | |
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Yep I thought I noticed that too. I was concentrating so much on the second half that when I go back to the beginning my ears are tired I think. Thanks Mark, I'll look into it. Although all comments are wonderful, these are the kind of comments I really appreciate. Check out my latest song called Footprints in the Sand - Final
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| magnatone said 108 days ago (August 5th, 2009) | |
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WIP-2 well andrew - as confused as i am about which ones i've heard, i just listened to THIS again, and i LOVE it. your textures are so rich and real and moving! we're lucky to have you at MJ! Check out my latest song called Symphonic Smackdown
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| Henke said 108 days ago (August 5th, 2009) | |
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I'm happy about it Possibly with the exception of the slightly abrupt ending, but I guess maybe it will be merging into the next song on the album? Mark may of course be right about the voice volume, it makes sense when reading it even if I wouldn't have thought of it myself... Take care. /Henke Check out my latest song called Heading for Alpha Centauri (mj space race 2009)
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| LunaTrick said 108 days ago (August 5th, 2009) | |
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Nice work Andrew Very smooth textures! Check out my latest song called Luna Gypsy Heart II (Eternal Firelight)
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| dantimmermans said 108 days ago (August 6th, 2009) | |
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whatever that thing at 0:59 is... ...it's awesome! good work here, i love the pulse this has and the sampled voice is just right and very well integrated. Check out my latest song called From The Fire (Alt)
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| Ex_Silentio said 108 days ago (August 6th, 2009) | |
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Indian Ocean I love this Indian-flavored music, especially the female voice. Did you get Sheila Chandra to work on this? So, far be it from me to critique your work, but here goes anyway. I think Holbrook's suggestion makes sense. I would add this: if the vocal track is as loud as it is now, I would move it to the center, and make her the focal point. If you make the vocal quieter, as part of the background, it's fine where it is. And maybe a gentler ending. Just a thought. I think this is a great piece. Check out my latest song called Loneliness Becomes Pandora (MJ Space Race 2009)
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| AlchymicalMuse said 106 days ago (August 7th, 2009) | |
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Great sounds Vox treatments are wonderful! Check out my latest song called Garden of Love (after William Blake)
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Check out some of my other songs:
More songs in Cinematic Soundtrack:
Boundless
Love the Indian singing's touch.
Smooth mellow mood.
Well done.
Thanks !