Crawling on the Floor

CrazeeFlootGrrl

Genre: Electropop

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This is a song I'm still in mid process of making.

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Lyrics

Seems like everyday I really hate you
And it feels like I really do
Then I come back 'round
Lovin' you, it freaks me out

It seems some days you really piss me off
To the point where I've had enough
Then I find myself
So sorry, I need your help

chorus:
Why are we so complicated?
Why are you so hated?
It's the things you do to me
Wishing I was free
But I'll find once more
I'm crawling on the floor

There's all these nights where I can't sleep at all
Hitting my head upon the wall
Feeling so lovesick
About you, we seem to click

I know I broke your heart so many times
But I won't stop singing these rhymes
Cuz I found the one
Oh for me, my searching's done

CHORUS

So take me away
I wanna be with you everyday
Cuz you're the only one for me
And I need you my baby

CHORUS

CHORUS

Yeah, yeah, I'm crawling on the floor...

Song Stats

Hits: 243
Comments: 9
Fans: 1
Plays: 46
Downloads: 12
Votes: 0
Uploaded: Aug 17, 2009 - 06:09:20 PM
Last Updated: Aug 18, 2009 - 12:46:10 PM Last Played: Nov 07, 2009 - 09:26:49 PM

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Comments

musichead	musichead said 97 days ago (August 17th, 2009)
	welcome!! welcome to mj....very nice job??? any singing to be expected? Check out my latest song called Lets Take a Holiday

CrazeeFlootGrrl	CrazeeFlootGrrl said 96 days ago (August 18th, 2009)
	Yep singing is definitely to be expected. Just have to finish up w/ the song itself first. And then getting a mic. Thanks! Check out my latest song called Stupid

Reinholt56	Reinholt56 said 96 days ago (August 18th, 2009)
	Hi...... This mix definitely has potential. Can't wait to hear what you do with it next. Take care. Paul Check out my latest song called Celestial Mechanics #2

Einarus

Einarus said 96 days ago (August 18th, 2009)

Very promising
Your writing here reminds me a lot of the music from "The Sims" series - especially "The Sims 3". If you could get some higher quality sounds or - better yet - get some live musicians on this, you've got yourself a really nice track!

Liked the melodies and the general vibe of this, but please - give this a proper ending :P

-Einar S.

Check out my latest song called Good Things Come in Fours

CrazeeFlootGrrl

CrazeeFlootGrrl said 96 days ago (August 18th, 2009)

Thanks
but to tell you the truth, my inspiration mainly came from "My Life Would Suck Without You" by Kelly Clarkson and "Please Don't Leave" by Pink. The lyrics were as well considering I was facing a similar situation at that point in my life. And while I'd love to get some live recordings, I don't know how that'd be possible. I lack all major guitar and percussion skills. And my bro still learning electric guitar. So I'm stuck there. And yes I'll definitley give it a proper ending, just it's still a work in progress. That's only about two-thirds so far. Thanks for your support!

Check out my latest song called Stupid

ShadowofNine	ShadowofNine said 83 days ago (August 31st, 2009)
	Really wanting to hear the vocals, PM me when yu do them, nice track ready and waiting... Cheers Check out my latest song called Falling Star

CrazeeFlootGrrl	CrazeeFlootGrrl said 83 days ago (August 31st, 2009)
	Merci beaucoup! I'll let ya know once I get significantly more accomplised! Check out my latest song called Stupid

crissew

crissew said 83 days ago (August 31st, 2009)

I think the melody of this
song has a lot of potential for a great vocal line over it. Kinda reminds me of something Cyndi Lauper or Madonna would do. One thing I would recommend is messing with the Garageband settings to get some more realistic midi sounds. There are some very good ones in there. Sometimes you may need to tweak the equalizer or add some reverb or chorus. Tons of options in there. To get to them you click on the "i" button then click the triange next to "Details". There you will be able to tweak your sound. You may already know this but that part of GB is hidden initially. YOu can also get a lot of free sounds on the net, check out this website http://www.thegaragedoor.com/tutorials/sftutorial.html

Check out my latest song called What Does Love Entail w Relic67, ciheins & Filmscorz

CrazeeFlootGrrl	CrazeeFlootGrrl said 83 days ago (August 31st, 2009)
	So which instrument would you suggest tweaking out of curiosity and how? [And I sort of know how to tweak, cuz I was messing around with that recently for some electric guitars on another song I'm currently working on.] Otherwise thanks for the advice! I'm slowly getting through towards the end, bit by bit! Check out my latest song called Stupid

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Electropop (also called Technopop) is a subgenre of synth pop music which flourished during the early 1980s, although the first recordings were made in the late 1970s. Numerous bands have carried on the electropop tradition into the 1990s and 2000s.

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