Stupid

CrazeeFlootGrrl

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Okay, so first of all, I swear that the title goes with the lyrics! So next, this is a bit of a classical-pop-rock song I made last fall. Since then it's been practically completely. I just have to record the vocals, which will require a good mic... *sigh* Well, enjoy for now!

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Lyrics

Please tell me what I can do
Cuz I don't want no one new
And I won't ever hurt you
Cuz I swear I'll never leave you

Many times I broke your heart
Cuz I wasn't all that smart
Threw everything good away
And now I have something to say

chorus:
I was stupid
Such a damn fool
Wish I never ever threw it all away
And I miss you
More than ever
And I understand if you won't take me back

Sometimes I don't wanna see
Otherwise depressed I'll be
I've made too many mistakes
Never again I'll slam the brakes

I will always be jealous
When you choose her and not us
So I'll just be here waiting
'Til that far day when we're dating

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Song Stats

Hits: 365
Comments: 14
Fans: 3
Plays: 70
Downloads: 15
Votes: 2
Uploaded: Aug 18, 2009 - 11:28:06 AM
Last Updated: Aug 19, 2009 - 07:01:27 PM Last Played: Nov 21, 2009 - 06:19:55 PM

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crissew

crissew said 99 days ago (August 18th, 2009)

You can get by
with a pretty inexpensive mic like a SM-57 (made by Shure). You can get these mics for under 50 used on ebay and they are the best bang for the buck mic you can buy. This song has potential. I would experiment with the MIDI tones you are using on this song. If you are using garageband, it is pretty easy to do. I am hearing something warmer for the main keyboard part (maybe the garageband grand piano or something like that). Good start!!

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CrazeeFlootGrrl	CrazeeFlootGrrl said 99 days ago (August 18th, 2009)
	Thanks I'll be sure to check that out as soon as I get the chance! That would definitely be good for me. And I think actually I'm currently using on of the GB grand pianos. Could be the punchy one but I don't remember... Would you suggest a different one? Check out my latest song called Stupid

Einarus

Einarus said 99 days ago (August 18th, 2009)

Nice one
The piano line is simple yet effective, although I think you could've changed it up a bit during that first minute.
I like the way you introduce various new sounds and they create a pretty well balanced background. I would maybe bring the volume of the synth sweep pad down a bit, as it almost distracts a bit from the rest of the ensemble.

When the aggressive drums (maybe a bit too aggressive?) come in, I think it really needs some low end, i.e. bass or bass pads.

Finally I think you should rather fade out the final chord rather than letting it cut off like that.

But all in all a nice piece of music.

-Einar S.

Check out my latest song called Good Things Come in Fours

CrazeeFlootGrrl	CrazeeFlootGrrl said 99 days ago (August 18th, 2009)
	Thanks for the input! It's good to get other people's input, especially people with more music background than those of some friends and family. I'll try taking some of your advice and will see how it goes! Overall, thanks! Check out my latest song called Stupid

Feter	Feter said 99 days ago (August 18th, 2009)
	Stupid THis is lovely ...very nice arrangement .. and how you let the synth layers all work through your song ...cant wait to hear your voice over this ...good job ..thnx alot for sharin !!!! Check out my latest song called A Night With Feter feat'(Roxylee sloparts crissew johnwhitehead and Yamin AL Yamani )

CrazeeFlootGrrl	CrazeeFlootGrrl said 99 days ago (August 18th, 2009)
	Thanks I can't wait either til it's all together! And thanks for your feedback and support! Check out my latest song called Stupid

I.G.M.	I.G.M. said 99 days ago (August 18th, 2009)
	Nice tune Jessica wow, lots of tunes, hmmm, think about loading up song by song, not all at once. so you will get much more attention on a tune. sorry cris but I don`t think the sm-57 is a good buy because it`s a mic for live performances not for homerecording. I use an Audio Technica 3035 and I`m very glad with it!!! Welcome at MJ Jessica!! Check out my latest song called I`m Gone

crissew	crissew said 99 days ago (August 18th, 2009)
	I agree that the audio technica is much better if you can afford 200 bucks. I think CFG is a high schooler though Check out my latest song called What Does Love Entail w Relic67, ciheins & Filmscorz

dadgarus	dadgarus said 99 days ago (August 18th, 2009)
	Stupid I think it's better to upload your songs with vocals, so they may be listenable and rearrange your song with a better quality quality. Check out my latest song called I Break

ShadowofNine	ShadowofNine said 85 days ago (September 1st, 2009)
	Nice now all we need is a singer, and we can rock...very nice track Jessica Check out my latest song called Brothers and Sisters

maxruehl	maxruehl said 85 days ago (September 1st, 2009)
	Hey! There are some really cool moments in this...but where's the floot?:P Really nice energy, especially towards the end. Good job.:) Check out my latest song called Shaolin Munk Funk (w/ musichead & awigze)

guitapick	guitapick said 28 days ago (October 28th, 2009)
	~ I like the way this builds. The theme's present throughout...nice variations. Sennheiser makes a nice vox mic...as does Shure of course. $100. A vocal will sound nice with this. You can get by for practice using the built in on the computer. Does the trick nicely... Check out my latest song called Outside the Corral

Calchas	Calchas said 25 days ago (October 31st, 2009)
	Damn nice tune! How'd I not hear this until now? (Sometimes it's so hard to keep up...) Wonderful composition. Looking forward to the vocals! Be well! Check out my latest song called IT'S NOT THE SAME

	IdleBel10 said 18 days ago (November 7th, 2009)
	Nice graet into and the build is almost genius, great piece. Check out my latest song called Opus Seven (Unmarked Grave)

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