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work in progress.... total overhaul next update
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Lyrics
if i could write a song as relevant as you
i'd be on my knees praying to you
every night every night makes me new

i never showed my heart enough
made her wonder if it's enough to get through
i'd show my heart to you

don't make life harder than it is
the world will help enough with that

if i could write a song to you
i'd make it shine and speak to you i'd make
you feel so fucking new
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Uploaded: Aug 23, 2009 - 01:49:09 PM
Last Updated: Sep 19, 2009 - 03:54:18 PM Last Played: Oct 07, 2009 - 09:12:32 AM
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VicDiesel said 91 days ago (August 23rd, 2009)
Nice job
Good song.

The drums are a bit soft: that double time hi-hat is very hard to hear.
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ramonaji said 91 days ago (August 23rd, 2009)
cool so far!
I can't wait to hear the final!
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dynamite_van_pipe said 90 days ago (August 24th, 2009)
Neat...
... this is shaping up into a really cool song. It's got a great melody, the vocals are strong in most areas and the guitars are suitably crunchy. Love the echoing backing vocals - gives it a bit of an 80's Dream Academy feel. Bravo
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Laverne said 90 days ago (August 24th, 2009)
Great start.
Your voice has style. The melodies are memorable and earnest. Solid arrangement. The mix itself – I hope you were planning to overhaul that specifically. There's a lot of potential in the instruments. Just needs some love. I admire your artistry! Thanks for sharing! I'll be waiting for the next version.
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ste said 87 days ago (August 27th, 2009)
likin
the melodic line and the vox seemingly battling the synths
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sloparts said 84 days ago (August 30th, 2009)
Great start
I'll be listening to hear how this develops. Great vocal work, but I would have liked to had the lyrics posted so I could follow. My problem, not yours, I'm getting hard of hearing so I miss a lot sometimes.

Keep up the good work my friend. Like what you've done so far.

Ed
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