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| Feter said 63 days ago (September 24th, 2009) | |
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L' statha d' draa serisen Impressive structure ...loved how you mesh the instruments leading the solos into the mood .. good writing my friend ..nice samples ...nicely done ..thnx alot for sharin !!!! Check out my latest song called A Night With Feter feat'(Roxylee sloparts crissew johnwhitehead and Yamin AL Yamani )
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| davisamerica said 62 days ago (September 25th, 2009) | |
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Welcome to MJ Nicely done piece of work. A small suggestion ...... Drakonis mentioned some dynamic changes and I would think so as well. This is a very well crafted composition. The melody to my ears really wants to "build"... just give it some room to do so. Thank you for a very enjoyable listen. Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)
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| Grifion said 60 days ago (September 27th, 2009) | |
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^^ Thank you very much guyz. I'll try to work on more dinamycs. And I'm happy, cuz this is really my first own song, and it seems, you're like it. I'm working on the next, and thanks for every tips. ^^ Check out my latest song called L' statha d' draa serisen(The story of two lovers) by Grifion
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drakonis
Very nice flowing soundtrack-style music. You have some nice use of orchestration, and you change things through the music so it does not get boring and repetitive. I might suggest working on more dynamics, maybe? Try starting a passage with just a few instruments, and on each repeat of the 4-bar theme, add another instrument to help things build and add color. Start soft, and slowly make things louder, then let certain instruments get quieter. Those are some first thoughts to help this along. But it is very nice! Welcome to Macjams, and I hope to hear more of your music soon.
ttfn,
Drakonis