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This is Take 2 on this song. Just your run-of-the-mill song about gravity.
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Thank You, Isaac
V1
i am told this is
how, the story goes
but this story knows
no steady rise to climax 'for it falls
you walk with me
and i i cant believe
that tall oak tree
has shed none of its green skin on the ground
Chorus
i know this is a single cell
i know were spinning out of control
it's a sickening feeling we learn
were on the wrong side of gravity's pull
V2
the sky is blue
and i, i know its true;
cuz i, i consulted you
and you told me what you thought about it now
and when we missed,
our headlights kissed
now a, head-on tryst
means we never have to think about it now
Chorus
i know this is a single cell
i know were spinning out of control
it's a sickening feeling we learn
were on the wrong side of gravity's pull
were on the wrong the side of gravity's pull
and its pushing us down as we go
thank you isaac your masterful
you made the whole world unbearable
V3
we talk of life
like we can live it right
as if were not alike
ill take whats mine sugar coat this smile
we talk of death
like we, can picture it
and we we throw a fit
every time its image paints itself on us
Outro
an apple fell
now we fall
and it hurts
when we hear
that the earth
isnt circled by the sun anymore
when i was young
i would leap
from roof
in spite of you
broke my arm
and i thank you for your heavy numbers now
when you walk
do you feel
the weight of math
on your bones
and wish that
apples sprouted up like carrots from the ground?
V1
i am told this is
how, the story goes
but this story knows
no steady rise to climax 'for it falls
you walk with me
and i i cant believe
that tall oak tree
has shed none of its green skin on the ground
Chorus
i know this is a single cell
i know were spinning out of control
it's a sickening feeling we learn
were on the wrong side of gravity's pull
V2
the sky is blue
and i, i know its true;
cuz i, i consulted you
and you told me what you thought about it now
and when we missed,
our headlights kissed
now a, head-on tryst
means we never have to think about it now
Chorus
i know this is a single cell
i know were spinning out of control
it's a sickening feeling we learn
were on the wrong side of gravity's pull
were on the wrong the side of gravity's pull
and its pushing us down as we go
thank you isaac your masterful
you made the whole world unbearable
V3
we talk of life
like we can live it right
as if were not alike
ill take whats mine sugar coat this smile
we talk of death
like we, can picture it
and we we throw a fit
every time its image paints itself on us
Outro
an apple fell
now we fall
and it hurts
when we hear
that the earth
isnt circled by the sun anymore
when i was young
i would leap
from roof
in spite of you
broke my arm
and i thank you for your heavy numbers now
when you walk
do you feel
the weight of math
on your bones
and wish that
apples sprouted up like carrots from the ground?
Listening to this track, I noticed that your guitar sounds out of tune. The lyrics and melody aren't bad, so an improvement in the tuning would help immensely.
Beyond that, adding a bass line would also be a nice touch, even it was simple root notes of each chord. It needs some depth and that would help.
Overall, not a bad composition, just needs a little bit of work.