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One Day


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JayLCiazz

 Genre: Acoustic

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Too observed with reaching for and achieving your goals and forgetting about the dear ones around you.. that has been happening a lot in my life.. The strong will to become famous..the hard work that is needed to at least be in the race. Should I give up now and spend more time with my family or should I keep fighting for my dreams... My inner source is full of ambition...and probably always will be....

One day, I Say, One Day...I'll make it up to you my love

One Day
written by JayLCiazz©2009
o0o™ Records
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One Day
written by JayLCiazz©2009
o0o™ Records

I'm sorry
I forgot your birthday
I wasn't there
on that special day

Can you forgive me
I'll make it up to you
One day
I say
One day

your glory
was not for me too see
I wasn't there
on that special day

How can you live with me
I keep failing you
but one day
I say
One day

Broken promises
Broken dreams
One day
I say
One day

Broken memories
Broken dreams
One day
I say
One day

I'm sorry
Did I miss your graduation
Wasn't I there
On that special day

Can you forgive me
I'll make it up to you
One day
I say
One day

One day
I say One day

Broken promises
Broken dreams
One day
I say
One day

One day
I say
One day

I'm sorry
I forgot to be around
It was not fair
To my family

Can you not leave me
I'll make it up to you
One day
I say
One day

I'm sorry
things will turn around from now
I'll spend more time with you
starting from this day

Broken promises
Broken dreams
One day
I say
One day
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Hits: 178
Comments: 9
Fans: 4
Plays: 10
Downloads: 0
Votes: 1
Uploaded: Oct 03, 2009 - 07:28:34 AM
Last Updated: Oct 03, 2009 - 07:28:34 AM Last Played: Nov 08, 2009 - 11:08:18 PM
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DarkPlanet said 52 days ago (October 3rd, 2009)
Nice melody
Reminds me of early 90s alternative, I would've love if Bass and drums suddenly came in but the almost harmonies make up for it
Check out my latest song called Roll Your Bones
JayLCiazz said 51 days ago (October 4th, 2009)
Upcoming
new versions...still acoustic for the official album "intimate confessions". the loops will be replaced! :D
after the album released some songs will be uploaded here that have drums and maybe bass....
I hope we can entertain you even more with that :D
Thanks Dark!
Check out my latest song called One Day
MarkHolbrook said 52 days ago (October 3rd, 2009)
Beautiful sound!
Love the guitar work and the whistles are cool! Excellent song!
Check out my latest song called Never Say Goodbye - Bond Challenge
JayLCiazz said 51 days ago (October 4th, 2009)
wooot!!
thanks mark! Appreciate your visit...a lot! the guitar work is not THAT impressive..it's just a loop :D
But there is a non loop in the making....Crissew is doing that job... and he does that so well.. I'm happy to work with him.....so look out for the non loop version in a while :D
Check out my latest song called One Day
Feter said 52 days ago (October 3rd, 2009)
One Day
Things happened ... lovely lyrics ..strong
strummin sound .what kinda guitar is that ?
good mic ing .....sure the vocal works just
perfect ...good job my friend ...thnx alot
for sharin !!!!!!
JayLCiazz said 51 days ago (October 4th, 2009)
They do...
and when things happen one is not always prepared lol...anyway...
The guitar is a loop Feter....and that cannot be said about my vocals hahahah..so thanks on the compliment on that :D A smile on my face is the answer...
Check out my latest song called One Day
drakonis said 51 days ago (October 3rd, 2009)
beautifully sad
very simple song and melody and guitar playing, but also very rich, maybe because of the interesting chords and whistling, but mostly your cool singing/harmonies. However, the lyrics linger like the smoke of a promise, very nicely written, but offering a sad vaporous message. Achieving a balance between what you want to take for yourself and what you want to give to your friends and family, what a difficult thing to do... Nicely done!

ttfn,
Drakonis


Check out my latest song called Lullaby for the Inner Child
JayLCiazz said 51 days ago (October 4th, 2009)
Hugs Drakonis
You have such a great way of laying out your words....I'm in awe....realy that is a talent too...
Your kind words reached my heart and touched it...Again another big smile on my face....woooot...
And that on my birthday :D I'm such a lucky guy!

Thanks man.
Check out my latest song called One Day
lengold said 49 days ago (October 5th, 2009)
You have built
a simple guitar loop into a beautiful song, beautifully sung.
Cheers
Len

Check out my latest song called Dodgy Doughnut
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JayLCiazz is a Dutch artist who is currently working on his acoustic album "Intimate Confessions". You'll find the demo's on this website. After 5 years of finding out which route would fit him best musically...currently acoustic is what appeals t... [see more]

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