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Once more


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dadgarus

 Genre: Rock
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Lyrics
Can't walk
it's too cold
my feet are almost frozen
Can't sleep
in the snow
I see you door ain't open

I try
to ask your help
You don't care that I'm calling
I say
I need your hand
You don't know that I'm falling

Once more
open the door
let me step inside
Once more
open the door
there's nothing but the night

I feel
I'm gonna die
right next to your door
You are
the one who's got
my life and death in hands

I beg
you on my knees
Don't let my body freez
Give me
just one more try
I beg you for a chance

Once more
open the door
let me step inside
Once more
open the door
there's nothing but the night
Song Stats
Hits: 173
Comments: 7
Fans: 5
Plays: 46
Downloads: 7
Votes: 0
Uploaded: Oct 12, 2009 - 10:02:25 AM
Last Updated: Oct 12, 2009 - 10:02:25 AM Last Played: Oct 27, 2009 - 05:20:01 AM
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Comments
sheilad said 40 days ago (October 12th, 2009)
a great
tune here! Nice lyrics and great vocals
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Char said 40 days ago (October 12th, 2009)
Oh,
really nice job on music and lyrics and vocals. Enjoyed it. Way to go, kid. Thanks.
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drakonis said 40 days ago (October 12th, 2009)
Nice rocker...
This is a cool rocker that weaves between metal and darkwave and electronica... interesting. As always, nicely written, arranged, and sung, Dadgar! This almost feels like there should be a loud guitar break in the middle, or a much softer electronic break in the middle (with ethereal female singing) to break up the even-ness of this, but that's the only thing I could think of, and it is a little suggestion... really this is good as-is.
ttfn,
Drakonis
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magnatone said 40 days ago (October 12th, 2009)
Once More
Hi Dad! great to have a new upload from you! you're very talented with your lyrics/vocals and general musicianship - much enjoyed - thanks!
Check out my latest song called Symphonic Smackdown
Outtaorbit said 37 days ago (October 15th, 2009)
your tunes are so ......
Nicely done....
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Gaylen75 said 37 days ago (October 15th, 2009)
Nice
Straight rock and very great tone. Love the keys.
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awigze said 36 days ago (October 15th, 2009)
Dagarus
Ya- know the feeling... glad those days are over for me... you captured the anguish really well in your vocals... in the snow- ya- I like that... good tune and well constructed with the breaks in the middle.
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