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Park Sonata (Digital)


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persona

 Genre: Piano

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This is the Digital Recording of my prior submission (Park Sonata)
The intent was to improve the sound quality, change a little bit the intensity of the song and different parts of it and fix some wrong notes in the prior version :)
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This is my first composition - May/09.
Out of a night where I could not sleep, recalling a walk in Central Park the music started to flow.

It made me into composing and I hope it will be a long and great journey!

Thank you for listening and please share your thoughts.
Thank you for all the comments on my original submission - I hope I fixed some of the problems from the first version.
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Comments: 16
Fans: 9
Plays: 255
Downloads: 78
Votes: 2
Uploaded: Oct 21, 2009 - 09:02:05 PM
Last Updated: Oct 21, 2009 - 09:10:08 PM Last Played: Oct 20, 2016 - 02:20:46 AM
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Hardware:
Casio Ceviano
Software:
GarageBand
Comments
Char said 2955 days ago (October 21st, 2009)
Sounds a bit
richer, maybe quicker or more textured. I am not a musician. Nice. Yes, better. Thanks.
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persona said 2954 days ago (October 23rd, 2009)
glad
you liked it! tks!
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crissew said 2955 days ago (October 21st, 2009)
Enjoyed it
A little more touch on the soft parts in this one. Like the quietness of the ending. Sounds good! Now that you have it in digitally, you can have some fun with it and add strings or anything you want.

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persona said 2954 days ago (October 23rd, 2009)
it never ends.. :)
Now to the orchestrated version.. perhaps some day :)
Thanks for the tips.
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Feter said 2955 days ago (October 21st, 2009)
Park Sonata
Lovely ...sweet theme and air all around ..
it can have some tricks to let it more alive
but its so nice as is ..good job on writing
thinx alot for sharin !!!!
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persona said 2954 days ago (October 23rd, 2009)
changes.
yes. I guess some parts could be enriched. I think I'll let it sit for a while and revisit it later for a fresh new look.
thanks for the feedback!
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MarkHolbrook said 2954 days ago (October 22nd, 2009)
I'm not sure
which I like better... Obviously the digital version is cleaner but there is a certain charm associated with the "live" version...

Heck I like them both!
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persona said 2954 days ago (October 23rd, 2009)
true!
the live version feels "warmer" I believe because of the sound not so crisp - I guess imperfection has its own beauty :)

I'll leave both versions up so everyone is happy :)
thanks for listening!
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ste said 2953 days ago (October 23rd, 2009)
really
good piece. sticking another instrument over the piano might sound cool, too.
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persona said 2949 days ago (October 27th, 2009)
planning
to do that :) thanks for listening!
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woofer3 said 2953 days ago (October 23rd, 2009)
a pastoral feel
which is exactly what is required, I love your composition very much and encourage you to go on. I really enjoyed it and have been playing it on my own piano. You can do so much with this idea and expand it to where ever you wish to go. Excellent.
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persona said 2949 days ago (October 27th, 2009)
wow!
thanks for listening and playing it! perhaps would be interesting to listen to your take on it :)
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magnatone said 2953 days ago (October 23rd, 2009)
Park Sonata redux
hi persona-this turned out really well. and yes, you might want to revisit sometime and try your hand at some orchestration. that's exactly what i've been doing - playing in a piano composition, and then orchestrating it in garageband - you won't believe how FUN that is to do! this version is cleaner, and i notice you've made a couple of the changes we talked about - sounds great - congrats! you're hooked, therefore, you're TOAST!! :)
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persona said 2949 days ago (October 27th, 2009)
thanks
Karen for all comments and suggestions. I guess i'm hooked.. oh well - it's a good thing to be hooked at :)
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sloparts said 2948 days ago (October 28th, 2009)
For a redo of your first piece of music
this is very very good. I wish I had the ability you show now, when I was just starting out.

I agree with Karen, if you love this now, just wait until you add some orchestration. You'll not believe how good that feels inside your soul.

Great piece Persona, keep at it man you have a gift.

Ed
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Rasapriya said 2947 days ago (October 29th, 2009)
love classical
very nice piano solo. i am a sucker for beautiful classical music.

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