Here, but Gone

persona

Genre: Piano

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This is a first-recording/first-draft/improvisation from this sunday.
Thinking on many friends that are still here (I mean, alive), but gone from our lives.

Should revisit it later and fix a couple of errors from this 'live' play but want to share it as it has touched me.
Sorry for the rough edges :)

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Hits: 151
Comments: 18
Fans: 6
Plays: 32
Downloads: 3
Votes: 1
Uploaded: Nov 04, 2009 - 10:36:22 PM
Last Updated: Nov 04, 2009 - 10:36:22 PM Last Played: Nov 20, 2009 - 02:56:36 PM

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classical (454), piano (715), friends (43)

Comments

Feter	Feter said 16 days ago (November 4th, 2009)
	Here, but Gone This lovely ...ye it has nice spirit ...I m enjoying it as I m hearing it and writing my comments .sweet tune ..good volume lovels s far ;..thnx alot for sharin !!!! Check out my latest song called A Night With Feter feat'(Roxylee sloparts crissew johnwhitehead and Yamin AL Yamani )

persona	persona said 16 days ago (November 4th, 2009)
	comments here... thank you Feter! Check out my latest song called Here, but Gone

crissew	crissew said 16 days ago (November 4th, 2009)
	Enjoyed it another pretty melody. The only suggestion I have is that the song build more. I was expecting it to speed up as it went along. A change in emotion would be cool in this song. Just my 2 cents. Nice job Check out my latest song called There Was A Time w/ kevmikwa

persona	persona said 16 days ago (November 4th, 2009)
	thanks for the idea Charles. I guess a "celebration" part of it with a full orchestra (even a choir? :)) would really have that energy built into it. I'm trying it with some violins and it may be something to surely add. thanks again! Check out my latest song called Here, but Gone

crissew	crissew said 16 days ago (November 5th, 2009)
	That may be cool but I was more referring to the piano part getting a bit more complex with faster notes toward the end. Not necessarily "festive", it can still be in the same mode but with more angst. Check out my latest song called There Was A Time w/ kevmikwa

notsosweet	notsosweet said 15 days ago (November 5th, 2009)
	... lovely dreamy quality - I enjoyed this a lot Check out my latest song called The Broken Doll's Waltz

persona	persona said 15 days ago (November 5th, 2009)
	glad you liked it! thanks! Check out my latest song called Here, but Gone

Char	Char said 15 days ago (November 5th, 2009)
	Sweet. Probably needs more variation in tempo or a second harmony woven around this one. Kind of sad. But very pretty. Thanks. Check out my latest song called Break Away (Mark Holbrook & Awigze)

persona	persona said 15 days ago (November 5th, 2009)
	captured the spirit of the moment. I guess I could try some things around the theme. thanks for the comment! Check out my latest song called Here, but Gone

Outtaorbit	Outtaorbit said 15 days ago (November 5th, 2009)
	This is lovely....... Friends..you can't live without them...nicely done Check out my latest song called Sea Shell Blues and Alannah

persona	persona said 15 days ago (November 5th, 2009)
	true even though we (or maybe only I) let them go. :-/ need to improve my "friendship gardening" :) Check out my latest song called Here, but Gone

guitapick	guitapick said 15 days ago (November 5th, 2009)
	6 months...? Wow...very impressive. This is somewhat reminiscent of a Beethoven sonata. Not an idle compliment. Just that feel and I'm particularly impressed with the way you separate the melody line from the accompaniment. Nice tune. Check out my latest song called Outside the Corral

persona	persona said 15 days ago (November 5th, 2009)
	Beethoven wow! Thank you for your comment. It's been quite an interesting 6 months period - specially the last month here at MJ. Learning a lot. Hope to be improving from composition to another. Check out my latest song called Here, but Gone

Mike_Lynn	Mike_Lynn said 15 days ago (November 5th, 2009)
	Great composition I like this moody piece. It just keeps me thinking about lot of things. This is a very good one-take effort. Look forward to your final version. Perhaps you would consider adding some strings to the second half of the song. Thanks for sharing / Mike Check out my latest song called Fragments (featuring Richard John)

persona	persona said 15 days ago (November 5th, 2009)
	thanks thats right. it has an open space for strings. even some percussion :) thank you for listening. Check out my latest song called Here, but Gone

VicDiesel	VicDiesel said 9 days ago (November 11th, 2009)
	Gentle That's some sweet piano playing. You're building on a simple idea, developing it, so the listener keeps paying attention, but still keeping a fairly constant mood without disruptions or large changes. Very nice. Check out my latest song called Desert Stars

sschedra	sschedra said 5 days ago (November 15th, 2009)
	Sad But a soft edged beauty. Almost has a hymn like quality. Very nice, Stephen Check out my latest song called Love's Fingers Fall

sschedra	sschedra said 5 days ago (November 15th, 2009)
	Sad But a soft edged beauty. Almost has a hymn like quality. Very nice, Stephen Check out my latest song called Love's Fingers Fall

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Never thought of making music. Until I started this year - triggered by one night of insomnia. It hasn't been 6 months yet so I have LOTS to learn - and this community is a great finding. My "wishlist": - improve my composing - improve the reco... [see more]

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