r cool and so is the playing......my nitpick r the constant
cymbal crash and some static i hear thruout the song...the
solo was pretty kool......

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Thanks, I used a loop for the drums which had the cymbal crash in it. I'm
going to attempt micing my drums for a more personalised sound.

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You said your vocals need work, but you really do have a
good voice. Don't you hate when you find a loop you like
and it has at cymbal crash at the beginning. Sometimes
with some creative editting you can remove it, but easier
said than done. The guitars sound good.

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Thanks for listening! I kind of liked the drum loop at first, but the cymbal
crash is a little much. I just wish micing drums wasn't such a pain in the ass.
thanks again.

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Some real good use of dynamics and building. I heard
that opening piano loop and I thought "Uh oh, another
one of those..." But then you made it your own and really
built a cool song around it.

Yeah its tough with the vocals--at least with me, it's like
okay, I just recorded the vocals, even though it was the
first time I ever sang them. Just get 'em down before I
forget the melody. Dunno if that's what you do; guess I
am suggesting (to myself more than you) that its best to
do more than one take on the vocals. Each time should
get better; feel more secure.

Having said that, the vocals are good. Just a couple of iffy
spots. Keep on rockin'!

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Thank you, I am going to post a new version with a different vocal range. This was a little higher than I usually sing.

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Yeaaa, this is it... dude, this was a delight/pleasure to
listen... jam jiggidy jaalsbin! i likedy likes... This was mos
def the best cut of urs i thought, though the vocals do
need a lil bit of work, still though, very nice, 9 out of 10 in
my book, if i heard it on the radio, with better vocals, i'd
keen in to see whose song it was...
Good job...

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Thanks!

I rerecorded the vocals for this check out King 2.

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