Water Chill

bitfeld

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This is my first attempt at blind macjams.com collaboration so I don't really know if I'm doing this properly.

Here's a song that really needs something more I think. Lyrics, either sung or spoken would definitely improve it. If you don't find it too boring please feel free to add to it. If you however do find it boring, please say so in the comments, so I get some feedback.

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Song Stats

Hits: 1345
Comments: 18
Fans: 12
Plays: 162
Downloads: 71
Votes: 2
Uploaded: Jan 09, 2010 - 12:42:27 PM
Last Updated: Jan 10, 2010 - 03:58:05 AM Last Played: May 18, 2013 - 12:56:47 PM

Song License

Creative Commons License:
Attribution-NonCommercial

Song Actions

Hardware:

Mac Mini (Intel)
M-Audio Keystation 49e

Software:

Logic express 9
Native Instruments Absynth 5 and free Kore Player
Vienna Symphonic Library

Comments

crissew	crissew said 1225 days ago (January 9th, 2010)
	I actually like the vibe of this song very much. And while it may sound boring to you now, the "boringness" is due to structure. That is good if someone wants to put some vocals on it. I had an immediate idea for vox on it. I will DL it and see what I can do with it. Check out my latest song called Devil's Argument!!!

Char	Char said 1225 days ago (January 9th, 2010)
	Not at all boring. Kind of slow and bluesy jazz. I have an idea too. We'll see what Charles gives you. Very nice. Thanks. Check out my latest song called The Sea

Char	Char said 1223 days ago (January 11th, 2010)
	Two days later and we have Black Widow Girl by crissew: http://www.macjams.com/song/58272 And, there you go! Great music. Check out my latest song called The Sea

bitfeld	bitfeld said 1225 days ago (January 9th, 2010)
	Thanks! Thanks to both for the feedback! This is really exciting! Check out my latest song called Autumn Leaves

Feter	Feter said 1225 days ago (January 9th, 2010)
	Water Chill Very nice ..yup this can take a deep singing or a poppish flavor vocalist ,it has bit of the 80s feeling ...nice song ..thnx alot for sharin !!!! Check out my latest song called Roll with it

bitfeld	bitfeld said 1225 days ago (January 9th, 2010)
	80s indeed! :-) You're quite right, Feter, can't escape the 80s feel it seems whenever I try a some electro-pop song. Thanks for droping by! Check out my latest song called Autumn Leaves

PrototypeEightyOne	PrototypeEightyOne said 1225 days ago (January 9th, 2010)
	Nice Vibe it really shapes around :54. I was really into that section, then the change up into 1:10 was nice. It held a great flow from that point on. I would maybe look into adding some more in the first :50 sec to grab the listeners attention just a tad more. Cool track. Check out my latest song called Mechanical Memories

bitfeld	bitfeld said 1225 days ago (January 9th, 2010)
	Appreciate the suggestions You're probably right about the slow start. The end maybe a little too repetitive. Noted! :-) Check out my latest song called Autumn Leaves

lengold	lengold said 1225 days ago (January 9th, 2010)
	You have created a lovely soundbed for a vocalist here. I am sure that it will go somewhere. Cheers Len Check out my latest song called B E A U T I F U L

magnatone	magnatone said 1225 days ago (January 9th, 2010)
	Water Chill ooh ... this is cool. can't wait to see what charles and/or char (or maybe both together???) come up with! Check out my latest song called Blind Love (Seeing Heart) - Orchestral Version

davisamerica	davisamerica said 1225 days ago (January 9th, 2010)
	really a nice soundbed for lyrics indeed ..... enjoyed Check out my latest song called 12

Lardo	Lardo said 1225 days ago (January 9th, 2010)
	Sound track Gorazd, I like it. I'll see if something comes to mind for lyrics and vocal styling. Check out my latest song called Rain Your Grace on Me (Joy of Grace)

bitfeld	bitfeld said 1222 days ago (January 12th, 2010)
	Glad you like it! :-) Great! Thanks for taking the time. Check out my latest song called Autumn Leaves

richard13	richard13 said 1221 days ago (January 13th, 2010)
	Not at all boring indeed, quite tasty. Very nice and thanks for the d/l. Check out my latest song called Caledonia

bitfeld	bitfeld said 1212 days ago (January 22nd, 2010)
	No no, thank you! :) Glad you like it! Check out my latest song called Autumn Leaves

Jarvoid	Jarvoid said 1220 days ago (January 14th, 2010)
	Nice solid and controlleed track,stands up on its own or could be developed further. Either way it's good. Jarvoid Check out my latest song called Cripple Creek Revised........By Jarvoid and the Banjo Bedraggled Manic Mandolin Accordion Squeezers

MarkHolbrook	MarkHolbrook said 1212 days ago (January 22nd, 2010)
	Ok I have been listening to this in the form of Widow by Crissew and giving him and Char a ton of credit... well... I needed to get over here and credit the cool music too. I can see how this inspired people to take off and do something cool with it. I'm gonna download it and try to mangle it a bit if you don't mind... I really like this! Check out my latest song called My 911

bitfeld	bitfeld said 1212 days ago (January 22nd, 2010)
	Please feel free ... to download and play with it, by all means. If you need separate tracks, drop me a message. And thanks for taking the time to listen and comment! Check out my latest song called Autumn Leaves