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A commercial pop song used completely with Garageband.
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| antonfosh said 1791 days ago (December 27th, 2004) | |
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Well done! Thanks very much. Would love some more comments, so feel free everybody. Any tips on how to make it better? What works, what doesn't? I wanna know! Thanks very much though. Check out my latest song called Next To Me
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| Pie said 1790 days ago (December 28th, 2004) | |
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bigger this track needs bigger drums and percussion. rythm section is even more important in this kind of pop. keep tinkerin' :-) Check out my latest song called Kaleidoscope (Single)
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| antonfosh said 1790 days ago (December 28th, 2004) | |
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bigger How do I do that? I can easily add in some more percussion, but I don't know how to make my main drum part bigger. I'm scared of it peaking.... Check out my latest song called Next To Me
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| antonfosh said 1790 days ago (December 28th, 2004) | |
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bigger AH thankyou so much! I have thickened the drums on a new version and it's made the world of difference! It sounds so much better with punchier drums. I won't post it up, because it's exactly the same as this version, but just with better drums, but I really appreciate your comment because it has made the track sound so much better. Anton Check out my latest song called Next To Me
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| Pie said 1785 days ago (January 2nd, 2005) | |
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bigger perhaps you could just post up the first 30 seconds? just curious :-) --- these online signatures are a load of bollocks! Check out my latest song called Kaleidoscope (Single)
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| TobinMueller said 1790 days ago (December 28th, 2004) | |
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Fun and dance Such a great voice. It is perfect for the pop genre. You did some very cool things with the effects, adding fun and danciness to this track. This track is full of fun, with timely adolescent sexiness combined with vintage synth stabs and a tongue-in-cheek attitude. Very entertaining. Check out my latest song called Forge A New Life (MJRF)
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| JunkyardCutiepie said 1790 days ago (December 28th, 2004) | |
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scary fun i dub thee a junkyard cutiepie! I see late chiming in on the comments, seems the macjams peeps covered things. What I think really works well is your arrangement, good job! Check out my latest song called Love Potion Ω
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| TennesseeVic said 1751 days ago (February 5th, 2005) | |
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Very poppy You've got a great voice for this sort of material, and the song writing is good too. My only quibble is the breakdown section at about 2/3 to the end. Since the rhythmic synth keeps going it feels like "I'm making some variation by just stopping to sing". The pad sound that comes in does not contribute enough, so this section feels like it needs something else. Do something with a completely different rhythm, for instance a halftime feel? Other than that, this is very enjoyable. Check out my latest song called Tecmo Superbowl 2009 w/ Dead End (MJRF 2004)
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| Emily Rohm said 1734 days ago (February 21st, 2005) | |
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Pants... I really like this track and could listen to this over and over. My only criticism is the "take your pants down" line. It's a bit cheesy, but I guess it also adds to the club atmosphere the backup and lyrics evoke. (ie Nelly's "I am gettin' so hot, I wanna take my clothes off..." ) So maybe the line fits in, but it still sticks out to my ears a bit. But hey, I've added this to my faves. Check out my latest song called Monica's Waltz
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| Leon said 1693 days ago (April 3rd, 2005) | |
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pure fun This song has the energy and fun that characterizes pop music. Your musical sense belies your youth. Scored it 7-8-7-7. (I usually don't give higher than 8, so that's saying much). Check out my latest song called The Nightingale (music and lyrics by Oceans)
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Song, voice, musical execution - all very done.