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Chickadee Chirp

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cplacito

 Genre: Acoustic Rock
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This is a woman song, for girls, its not manly by any means....I need to know if I should never do this again!
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Lyrics
If you were here with me
I would sing you a song
Both slow and sweet
if the rainforest disagrees
Then we would fight our sloth and apathy
When we don’t have time to waste
Id imagine you at a quicker pace
But I don’t believe its true
That runner faster would win this race

and I would sing

The tulips swayed her way
And all the lilacs were amazed
And the lilies could not contain
the beauty of the rose that she became
Woah oh oh oh
I would cross the seven seas
And travel through the oceans breeze
To wind up on her shore,
These are the things she means to me

If you were here with me
I would sing you a song
So slow and sweet
And if you woke up next to me
I would keep you warm
And hold you closely
move my fingers through your hair
If allowed to place them anywhere!
It would be my chocolate dream
To curl you softly as you sleep

And I would sing

The tulips swayed her way
And all the lilacs were amazed
And all the lilies could not contain
the beauty of the rose that she became
Woah oh oh oh
I would cross the finish line
To reach a voice that’s warm and kind
She makes it hard for me to swallow
If I could only make her mine!

…Then I would sing
Song Stats
Hits: 1979
Comments: 11
Fans: 4
Plays: 58
Downloads: 53
Votes: 1
Uploaded: Jan 23, 2010 - 10:42:53 AM
Last Updated: Jan 23, 2010 - 10:42:53 AM Last Played: Apr 02, 2016 - 01:46:56 AM
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Hardware:
mobile pre...all DI
Software:
macbook....stuff came on it
Comments
nevermine said 2883 days ago (January 23rd, 2010)
hey man
seriously u got it going on :) i love your voice and ask my friends though u cant but they know i am really fussy, i love it, only the chorus is a bit held back with ur vocals but yeah the rest is an awesome production and i loved it... different to everyday stuff but still commercial but thats not an insult, commercial is a good thing :) keep it up 5 out of 5 from me man
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DarkPlanet said 2883 days ago (January 23rd, 2010)
Nice
Reminds me of Death cab, very cool vocals, I like the melody, I hear that metal guitar texture when you go into the second verse, good stuff mang!
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kingbee said 2883 days ago (January 23rd, 2010)
chirpy chirpy
NEVER DO THIS AGAIN!!!
Only joking.
I like the sound of the acoustics on this..and is that a bass I can hear?
Did you get it fixed?
My only complaint is the drums.
I like the opening section and would drop the rhythm down on the 'and i would sing' section like you did at the end and the drums on the 'tulips swayed her way' section just feels a bit all over the place.
I would bring your vocals up a touch but apart from that this has the bones of being a good song
cheers

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johnwhitehead said 2883 days ago (January 23rd, 2010)
Chirp
I dig it. Nice vocals. Nicely written....very cool bass line. And a cool lyric, too. Keep it up.

BTW, just 'cuz it's a love song doesn't make it a 'girly' song.
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crissew said 2883 days ago (January 23rd, 2010)
Very well sung
Excellent vocals. I would notch down the pitch correction a tad, getting a few artifacts in there though. This has a kind of pop like sound to the vocals and a days of the new guitar sound. Well done. I think at 2:50 it would sound cool to have the song go acapella for a line or two then burst back into the song again.
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MannequinRaces said 2883 days ago (January 23rd, 2010)
Nice!
I would embellish the 'and I would sing parts more' like add some harmony vocals and bring the vocal volume up a bit. The drums also sound like they don't fit the song rhythmically in spots. For this being all DI though this songs really nice and all the sonic elements feels like they're in a cohesive space. What did you use for the drum sounds?
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bobnisbet said 2883 days ago (January 23rd, 2010)
I like the poetry & song
Keep it up... I think the fairer sex likes the poetry, I do too!
Feter said 2883 days ago (January 23rd, 2010)
Chickadee Chirp
Cool energetic rhythm and drums ..loved the
bass and drums choppin in time with your guitar
riff ..this is so moving ...loved the singing ..
nice nice job my friend ...thnx alot for sharin !!!!
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mybravedesign said 2882 days ago (January 23rd, 2010)
....
where have you been all my life...
this track kills... the changes are the best...
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Jim Bouchard said 2882 days ago (January 24th, 2010)
Owl City?
Got sort of an Owl City vibe, which the kids are really into these days. I think it's pretty nice. Music in general is pretty subjective and I could think of all sorts of things that you might add or subtract to make it different. But those are just aesthetic decisions and aren't really critical. There's a nice little hook that you morph into in the chorus that could be accentuated with bringing in a different instrument. Like some sort of synth. Even with sections that have a different rhythmic treatment, it seems a bit same-y and I think employing some synth layers and dropping out the guitar in parts would be a nice change. There's as nice little piano part sort of buried in there that could come out more. But all in all it's pretty nice. Nicely recorded, the mix is a bit dense but that's okay.
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VicDiesel said 2881 days ago (January 25th, 2010)
I like swaying tulips
Cool song. Solid arrangement.
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