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| SlimGirlFat said 1774 days ago (December 31st, 2004) | |
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Good Lyrics I like this song, Yes I agree that there are some timing issues and the track needs to tighten up a bit between the drums and your guitar. As a first go on GB its pretty good! I also feel you are rying to sing very gently which gives your voice some hesitation. Perhaps try to break the verses and chorus up with a bit more intrumental and sing with a bit more confidence. ( Which I know takes time.. heh heh, but you have a nice voice) Anyway, its a really great song with a catchy melody. I bet your daughter loves this.. SlimGirlFat Check out my latest song called Not Enough
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| ludar said 1558 days ago (August 4th, 2005) | |
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nice I-really-like-this-it-has-lots-of-potential. I-think-you-should-rerelease-this!! Check out my latest song called what a load of George Bush
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| Macaudion said 1324 days ago (March 25th, 2006) | |
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I love yer stuff What everyone before me has stated - Another wonderful song by you Thanks - Dion Check out my latest song called 123 iGetU
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| conruane said 1224 days ago (July 4th, 2006) | |
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A sweet song... for a sweet little girl. Nice work. Con |
| Cori Ander said 1170 days ago (August 26th, 2006) | |
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Great I have a nine year old daughter myself. I understand every word of your song. And I like this heatfelt song so much! This is an important song! Check out my latest song called Guitar test — Martin CSN (Gerry Tolman Tribute)
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Peter Greenstone
What a sweet song to write/record for your daughter.
Nice melody. While your singing is a little sloppy you do
have a really nice sounding voice.
Your tempo it is the main issue. If you can tighten it up
and get in sync with that drum loop that sure would help.
I always try to lay down a good strong drum beat to play
to rather than try to follow the metranome. It's easier to
hear and keep in time with. Maybe you did that.
Also, in the mix I'd wait a while before bringing in the
strings. Let it build to it.