Nessa

Willywagga

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This is a song I wrote for my 9 year old daughter; Nessa. It's a first attempt with Garageband, I know it's a bit all over the place, comments would be appreciated.

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Hits: 1356
Comments: 7
Fans: 2
Plays: 218
Downloads: 76
Votes: 10
Uploaded: Dec 27, 2004 - 08:19:51 AM
Last Updated: Dec 27, 2004 - 07:24:00 AM Last Played: Oct 08, 2009 - 06:08:43 PM

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Hardware:

Mac G5, Yamaha acoustic guitar, condenser mic, M-Audio 49e, Behringer ub 1002.

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Comments

Peter Greenstone

Peter Greenstone said 1787 days ago (December 31st, 2004)

a sweet song
What a sweet song to write/record for your daughter.
Nice melody. While your singing is a little sloppy you do
have a really nice sounding voice.

Your tempo it is the main issue. If you can tighten it up
and get in sync with that drum loop that sure would help.
I always try to lay down a good strong drum beat to play
to rather than try to follow the metranome. It's easier to
hear and keep in time with. Maybe you did that.

Also, in the mix I'd wait a while before bringing in the
strings. Let it build to it.

Check out my latest song called From Nothing

SlimGirlFat

SlimGirlFat said 1787 days ago (December 31st, 2004)

Good Lyrics
I like this song,
Yes I agree that there are some timing issues and the
track needs to tighten up a bit between the drums and
your guitar.
As a first go on GB its pretty good!

I also feel you are rying to sing very gently which gives
your voice some hesitation. Perhaps try to break the
verses and chorus up with a bit more intrumental and sing
with a bit more confidence. ( Which I know takes time..
heh heh, but you have a nice voice)

Anyway, its a really great song with a catchy melody.
I bet your daughter loves this..

SlimGirlFat

Check out my latest song called Not Enough

	ludar said 1571 days ago (August 4th, 2005)
	nice I-really-like-this-it-has-lots-of-potential. I-think-you-should-rerelease-this!! Check out my latest song called what a load of George Bush

Macaudion	Macaudion said 1338 days ago (March 25th, 2006)
	I love yer stuff What everyone before me has stated - Another wonderful song by you Thanks - Dion Check out my latest song called 123 iGetU

conruane	conruane said 1237 days ago (July 4th, 2006)
	A sweet song... for a sweet little girl. Nice work. Con

Cori Ander	Cori Ander said 1184 days ago (August 26th, 2006)
	Great I have a nine year old daughter myself. I understand every word of your song. And I like this heatfelt song so much! This is an important song! Check out my latest song called Guitar test — Martin CSN (Gerry Tolman Tribute)

	said 1146 days ago (October 3rd, 2006)
	great singing cool song a special song for a special daughter. good guitar playing and your singing is good. The world needs more songs like this. great job

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