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final lesson


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norick.h

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I'm from Japan. This is my first posting. A 9 minutes song which contains 1) an ensemble of clear guitar and piano, 2) hipop-like rhythm, 3) dub-bass, 4) distorted vocal with house beat, 5) ambient synth, and the end...
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Lyrics
My time suddenly comes to an end,
but it goes to a deep silence.
Lifetime is certainly a trivial dump,
but will finally soothe and calm down.
If it's a nightmare, I will be a watcher, I will receive it.
If it's a nightmare, I will be a watcher, I will receive it.
Song Stats
Hits: 1761
Comments: 4
Fans: 1
Plays: 117
Downloads: 99
Votes: 5
Uploaded: May 02, 2006 - 11:14:36 AM
Last Updated: May 02, 2006 - 09:14:44 AM Last Played: Dec 11, 2011 - 08:46:29 PM
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Hardware:
e-mac G4 1000, iBook G3 800 (for recording), M-Audio Transit USB, Shure SM58.
Software:
GarageBand, Crystal (AU plug-in)
Comments
said 3095 days ago (December 28th, 2004)
Nice Feel
Kinda Latin (as in Latin-American, not the dead language).
Vocals fit the electronic production nicely. speaking of the
production, it's a little rough to my taste compared to the
smoother production at the beginning of the song). Would
you happen to be a fan of Ryuichi Sakaomoto? The piano
reminds me a bit of some of the things he was doing in
the late 80s, early '90's.

My main problem would be the length.

But I probably have the musical equivalent of attention
deficit disorder.
norick.h said 3095 days ago (December 29th, 2004)
Nice Feel
Thank you for listening for 9 minutes. The length is due to my own
attention deficit disorder. At the beginning, I got a hint of guitar and
piano. Sakamoto's "Illustrated Musical Encyclopedia" was on my mind. So
you are completely right! But on the halfway the melody and lyrics
intervened from "Underworld." You might treat this song as a kind of
medley of two different tastes.
Check out my latest song called just a fantasy
Scared sacred said 2605 days ago (May 2nd, 2006)
A Comment
Well, I listened to all of it, so I should comment.

Yet I don't know what to say. Frankly it doesn't fit my tastes. In this I hear a lot of things I _don't_ like about "dance" music. It could have been nice, but you took it in a direction that doesn't please me, one that resembles pop music.

As for constructive criticism, I'll say that you have a well-conceived track here. It's fairly complex and interesting. I like that it changes continuously; even though you have a set of motifs that you reuse without the song, they don't get repeptitive.
Check out my latest song called Brie (Beat)
norick.h said 2600 days ago (May 8th, 2006)
Re: A Comment
Thank you for your listening and comment.
It was good of you to find some ideas and melodies in this song. I know that
pop music lovers sometimes do not like dance music, but I will try to integrate
both elements.
Check out my latest song called just a fantasy
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Electronic dance music is a broad set of percussive music genres that largely inherit from 1970s disco music and, to some extent, the experimental pop music of Kraftwerk. Such music was originally borne of and popularized via regional nightclub scene

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