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antonfosh

 Genre: Hip Hop-Rap
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This song is a massive experiment for me. Some people might see it as a downside, but this song is largely created from Garageband loops. However, I don't see this as a bad thing - the idea for the song is still mine, and the main melody is my idea; the loops merely created the effect that I wanted.
I'm not happy with the middle section - ideally I would want someone to rap, but I certainly can't do it, and I don't know anyone else who can. If you're interested, please, send me an e-mail or post a message here, because I just think all the synths in the middle are a bit boring. Also, if you don't think the synths are boring, let me know.
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Hits: 1177
Comments: 3
Fans: 0
Plays: 154
Downloads: 89
Votes: 4
Uploaded: Dec 28, 2004 - 07:05:13 PM
Last Updated: Dec 29, 2004 - 11:48:05 AM Last Played: Nov 05, 2009 - 03:51:56 AM
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SlimGirlFat said 1746 days ago (January 28th, 2005)
I like
The only thing I notice about this is perhaps it needs just
a little more percussion/melody behind you in the verse.
the bridge is great, very dissonant and off beat. more full
if you see what I mean.
Nothing wrong with your rapping BTW although there are
usually people up for collaborations if you post in the
forums, either that or find an artist that you like here on
Mjs and email them.

The synths in the middle are good and not boring at all.
you used a nice mixture.

Good work Anton

SlimGirlFat

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Emily Rohm said 1721 days ago (February 21st, 2005)
Love the middle
My favorite part was actually the"rap" part in the middle! It was really a cool little break. Instead of rap there you could also have a sort of R&B hook overlap with that. Just a thought! I really liked it overall!
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12m said 1687 days ago (March 27th, 2005)
Synths are fine...
Its not too bad, hey if u want me on this, i already
freestyled on it, lol, 'what the hey"
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I'm a 20 year old boy who lives in London, UK. My main instrument is piano, and I have been playing for 13 years now. I've been writing music for about 11 years now, although when I was 10 it wasn't really any good! Garageband has helped me so much t... [see more]

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