Connection To The Sun

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This is an energetic song that I created on Garageband - absolutely no loops, apart from the drums which I hate programming! This was actually the first song I created on Garageband, but I gave up on it half-way through and only picked it back up in the last few days. Let me know what you think please.

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Lyrics

I've been waiting for you for so long
I've been searching for a face that makes me feel good inside
I knew that you could be the one
I just never had the courage to speak what is on my mind
But now that I'm talking to you, I'm gonna keep you
The moments that we spend together; night in bed is just like heaven

BRIDGE
I won't let you go
It's not that easy
You're in my flow
My river of life is moving faster than you know

CHORUS
Now I've got you in my arms
I can feel your tender charms
I'll warm your heart with all I have
Will that be enough?
Without you I'm obsolete
When you're here I feel complete
So stay a while inside my arms
Where I can feel you there

I've been searching for you for so long
No-one's ever made me feel like I am ready to fly
You’re my connection to the sun
Ain’t no clouds or rain, it’s just a wide open sky
Is this just temporary?
Or can I keep you?
The moments that we spend together; drinking wine is just like heaven

BRIDGE, CHORUS

Song Stats

Hits: 1617
Comments: 12
Fans: 3
Plays: 241
Downloads: 114
Votes: 21
Uploaded: Dec 29, 2004 - 11:56:35 PM
Last Updated: Dec 29, 2004 - 11:29:45 PM Last Played: Jan 13, 2009 - 07:48:40 PM

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Comments

antonfosh	antonfosh said 1787 days ago (December 30th, 2004)
	AH! Terribly sorry - I didn't realise the lyrics went like that, even when I used the return button. Lol, I always looked at other people's lyrics and thought to myself "Why do they never put puncuation in?"....now I know. Check out my latest song called Next To Me

Peter Greenstone	Peter Greenstone said 1787 days ago (December 30th, 2004)
	Not to my taste but well done This song is definately not to my taste, but it is well done. You're a talented singer. The mix it rather tinny. Check out my latest song called From Nothing

JunkyardCutiepie	JunkyardCutiepie said 1787 days ago (December 30th, 2004)
	really well done! Born to pop! Check out my latest song called Love Potion Ω

moorlandt	moorlandt said 1786 days ago (December 31st, 2004)
	Instant hit Not really my kind of music either, but definitely high class! What a wonderful production and (a) great musician(s). Check out my latest song called boundaries

g4macuser

g4macuser said 1785 days ago (January 1st, 2005)

good voice
I like this song. It´s a good compostition and you really
are a talented singer.
I hate drum programming, too. But please add some
breaks and fills to the drum tracks. It would bring (yet
more) life to the song. A song in this style should at least
sound as if a real drummer had been involved.

Secondly, the instruments, apart from the drums, are to
quiet and your voice (as good as it is) is a tiny little bit to
loud. You wouldn't hear the bass and the synth pad
anymore on smaller speakers (e.g. on a transistor radio).
You should remix it once more.

But all in all: good work. Keep it up.

Michael :-)

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hacked_to_pieces	hacked_to_pieces said 1784 days ago (January 2nd, 2005)
	Wow your an amazing teenager. Great job on both the music and vocal arrangements. 8 8 8 8 Check out my latest song called blues shuffle

Cameron

Cameron said 1783 days ago (January 3rd, 2005)

very musical
Your vocals/lyrics are excellent, and so is the musical
accompaniment. A lot of interesting little melodic hooks
and good chord progressions.

I agree with the previous observations about varying the
drum track more, and adding more of the lower end of the
sound-spectrum.

There's almost TOO much going on in this mix at times,
especially towards the end. Maybe some of the tracks just
need to be re-adjusted, a bit lower when there's so much
going on.

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Pie	Pie said 1776 days ago (January 10th, 2005)
	You the man ! Of all the music I've come across on this site yours shows the most potential for 'pop' success. Yes the production can be a little off at times, and they're not always to my taste - but, objectively speaking the songs are there. Keep it up. Check out my latest song called Kaleidoscope (Single)

SlimGirlFat

SlimGirlFat said 1758 days ago (January 28th, 2005)

Pretty Good.
Anton, I really think thatyou are very talented and your
arrangement and songwriting skills are really very good.
Good lyric writing as well. You do have a wonderful voice
and it is a real pleasure to listen.
Yes I agree with other comments that this track could
really do with some tighter production and mixing, but all
in all you are really heading in the right direction. Nice
use of vocals effects and layering of melody.

SlimGirlFat

Check out my latest song called Not Enough

TennesseeVic

TennesseeVic said 1750 days ago (February 5th, 2005)

The drums
It kinda shows that you hate drum programming. They do
go on a bit.... Try to find a better way to distinguish
between the sections?

I'm listening to this song after coming across your "Uh
oh". This song does not have the immediate appeal that
that one has. Partly that's the arrangement, and partly it
doesn't have any "novelty factor" that makes "Uh oh"
immeidately jump out at the listener.

But you're a great singer and songwriter. Hm. Which song
am I going to listen to next.

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jesushairdo	jesushairdo said 1713 days ago (March 14th, 2005)
	dont tell anyone that im your fan! oh man.... oh boy.... you are so good that i have to become your fan but pls dont tell anyone!! they might have a wrong idea! hahahaha! what does high school teach in scotland? pop music? i think i should go back to school.... anyway. good luck man. you will be big! Check out my latest song called Elephant in the Sky (Orchestra version)

12m

12m said 1699 days ago (March 27th, 2005)

LOL, im a fan aswell, jesushairdo, ur funny but right in essence, i second jesus
Man, this is sweet, hey man i thought i was listenin to
petshopboys for a little, than a little bit of jamiruqia vibe,
then ur own thing, ill take this over any boyband anyday,
way better than those candy ones nsycnyycysyc or
whatever they are...
I have to tell u: this is an awesome tune, the start was like
spring breeze man, it was freshidy fresh, kept me shakin
my head tho....
I dont think there is many with this much talent here, keep
bangin bro!!

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Artist Info

Name: Anton Fosh

I'm a 20 year old boy who lives in London, UK. My main instrument is piano, and I have been playing for 13 years now. I've been writing music for about 11 years now, although when I was 10 it wasn't really any good! Garageband has helped me so much t... [see more]

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