It sounds like you achieved what you had intended with
this tune but I think you would sound a whole lot hotter if
you pushed your voice harder. The sultry sexpot kind of
voice is sort of cool but it sounds to me like you've got
more stuff. Use it!

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I loved the xylophone and chime instrumentation
with the subtle electronic sounds thrown in... pretty
unique. The vocals fit the mood well, but were a
little overshadowed by the music. Maybe the music
could have been toned down in areas to highlight the
singing? I don't think you need to "let loose" diva
style, because that would be horrible... but maybe
just a touch more variation?

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I have to say I agree, regarding the vocals. I am really not the american idol
type and besides that i am definitely not hiding any great vocal ability! ha ha
Thanks for the comments.

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I guess my original comment was lost when you re-posted
the song with the technical fix. Anyway, love it.

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Lounge vibe, the vocals are nicely done and are perfect for
this song and the music is excellent especially the
xylophone and the other misc sounds sprinked thru out.

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Goes for a bit of the old Jane Birkin at first (think that old
track "Je t'aime" with Serge Gainsbourg...) but there is
something a bit discordant about the xylophone that
grates a bit. That second line doesn't sound quite right.

But it's still quite charming. And that's good.

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This moves along, nice choice of instruments. I like the
'noises' too. Very polished sound. Good job.

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i dig this. reminds me of this breathy japanese
singer.. kahimi karie.. good stuff.

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I really like some of your lyrics, and your use of "ah." Very
effective breathiness. I'd love to hear slightly more
variation in your arrangement, maybe even a bridge that
could let you punch thru, show a different angel of the
sexy voice thing. Nicely performed.

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I used that xylo loop in one of my first tracks.. I like it much. You should edit out the clips at the beginning and end.

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I liked it but the scratchy sound clashes and just sounds like static. I'd say to loose that.

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This is fairly lounge. Sweeet work.

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