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A month or two ago Char (as Demeter7) was having a problem with GarageBand and I was able to help her. As a reward she visited all my posts and left lovely comments on them. I sent her a private message asking her if she didn't have better things to do, which she didn't, so I sent her this odd hybrid I'd created and asked her if she could add anything to it. (It's odd, to me, in that it has reggae organ and bass lines (loops), a somewhat busy percussion section (also loops but several quantized variations), and a sad sort-of-European melody (MIDI from my keyboard): hey, I just combine these things and some of them sound good ;-)
Anyway, Char sent back an angst-ridden track of lost love that sounded great. We tweaked the lyrics a little, she sent me another couple of takes, I arranged all the bits and pieces, and here we are. This is my first "real" collaboration. Char's an old hand at it by now, so her part sounds great. I'm happy with the result but I'm curious to know how you feel.
Music by richard13
Lyrics by richard13 and Char
Vocals by Char
Anyway, Char sent back an angst-ridden track of lost love that sounded great. We tweaked the lyrics a little, she sent me another couple of takes, I arranged all the bits and pieces, and here we are. This is my first "real" collaboration. Char's an old hand at it by now, so her part sounds great. I'm happy with the result but I'm curious to know how you feel.
Music by richard13
Lyrics by richard13 and Char
Vocals by Char
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Lyrics
I Can't Sleep
Oooh, you don't know what you do;
I can't sleep because of you.
Oooh, you don't know who you are;
You toy with me, you go too far.
Till you came I had it all --
I did not expect to fall;
Foolish me could not resist.
Love is cruel, like a fist.
Oooh, you don't know what you do;
I can't sleep because of you.
Oooh, you don't know who you are;
Torture would be kinder far.
All of me is black and blue;
Dangerous -- this love, so new.
Tears of pleasure, tears of pain;
Loving you is quite insane.
Oooh, you don't know what you do;
I can't sleep because of you.
Oooh, you don't know who you are;
You toy with me, you go too far.
Till you came I had it all --
I did not expect to fall;
Foolish me could not resist.
Love is cruel, like a fist.
Oooh, you don't know what you do;
I can't sleep because of you.
Oooh, you don't know who you are;
Torture would be kinder far.
All of me is black and blue;
Dangerous -- this love, so new.
Tears of pleasure, tears of pain;
Loving you is quite insane.












































Skean
Nice work you2, me like:D